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Aril Problym · 07-15-2008, 05:27 PM

(Acapella//Spoken word style)Birthed right into a cypher,Graffiti bomb then I'm born/
Umbilical mic cords,Life force without diapers then I'm born/
Hyper for a tight verse my third eye forms then I'm born/
Supply the cardboard,Wave from left to right arm and I'm born/

I do more than just type words,known fact I was born in the cypher/
Go back,Talent show rhyme reciter,Train bomber...Overnighter/
Flow raps,Freestyle and brag who's tighter,undercover writer/
I'm so that,Low jack and spit it loud like soul claps..Chaka Khan through the fire/
Throw back,Capitol was a co-signer til they found out I was a Rider not a biter/
Oh man,Reborn so now I'm just alittle bit wiser!!
The King is here,Run these Mc's(Run Dmc)they call me sire!!
(LETS GO!!!)
(Beat comes in//Troubleman by Camp Lo instrumental)

Chorus x 2[I got crumbs conversating
Wanna know where Im at?
The King aint fall off
Roaches,Yall fall back!
Tremors when I walk through rooms
Yall felt that?!
Alot of herbs fear me
Yall smell that?
The Problym ressurected
Yall go run tell that!!] x 2

King with the crown,I'm the majestic enigma/
Paint audio pictures so now yall could see my sound/
The Flow pierce through ya flesh like hollowtips/
I'm Barrack,Yall Jesse that equals messy politics/
Cept my Cajunas stay in tact,My goons stay in back/
I'm to fly to be a thug...A sexy beetch! So I just rap!
Take over mic's(Mike's) like 50's house in Conneticut/
Or Better yet burn the bitch down with out evidence/
I get off like when them crooked cops got acquitted/
Dont get it twisted,I got midget macs for you critics/
My Niggadom bigger son and the throne is off limits/
Ya whole steelo rented,Over due so now yall evicted/
Punches lift you high,Catch contact like a fatty blown/
KingBorn...The Problyms back yall...Daddys home!!!!

Aril Problym · 07-15-2008, 05:34 PM

I spit this in a different style....uh....was listening to the old Camp Lo joint!!! Wrote this joint at like 3:00 am......cause thats when I'm most creative!! Wrote this in like a hour!! Yall knoooooooow.......Daddys home!!!

DXavier23 · 07-16-2008, 01:30 AM

I do more than just type words,known fact I was born in the cypher/
Go back,Talent show rhyme reciter,Train bomber...Overnighter/
Flow raps,Freestyle and brag who's tighter,undercover writer/
I'm so that,Low jack and spit it loud like soul claps..Chaka Khan through the fire/

My Niggadom bigger son and the throne is off limits/
Ya whole steelo rented,Over due so now yall evicted/

- I enjoyed reading much of this drop. A lot of good internal wordplay mixed with metaphors and punches. I also like the way you structured this piece which added to its overall creativity. If you want constructive criticism, your content could be a little bit stronger to increase the level of your lyricism but based on the subject of this drop, everything was pretty much on point. Stay up homie.

Aril Problym · 07-16-2008, 03:46 PM

thx homie propz coming!!

Aril Problym · 07-17-2008, 05:16 PM

^^^Must spread props before giving it to Dxavier23 again

Tyme Lyne · 07-18-2008, 11:29 AM

bout tyme...aril problym! Bunchy! ....damn that shyt was crazy son...switchin up on em...it was like a song with the drum rolls and sticks beatin em stacks!
the aril problym is home...that mutha fucka is Back!....

ill holla!...

Aril Problym · 07-18-2008, 03:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tyme Lyne

bout tyme...aril problym! Bunchy! ....damn that shyt was crazy son...switchin up on em...it was like a song with the drum rolls and sticks beatin em stacks!
the aril problym is home...that mutha fucka is Back!....

ill holla!...

Your not well!!

Tyme Lyne · 07-19-2008, 10:24 AM

ahahahha...i dont know what i was on when i posted that ..lol Real Talk .

Aril Problym · 07-21-2008, 03:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tyme Lyne

ahahahha...i dont know what i was on when i posted that ..lol Real Talk .

Do pink Pokemon's ring a bell? lol......

Tyme Lyne · 07-22-2008, 11:26 AM

nigga! u a bytch : in rileys voice.

" how many times I gotta tell you!...Pokemons are the shyt nigga! U a bytch for callin out my homies like dat ....and that pink shyt! Nigga that's gangsta! that's what they rock...they be schoolin' niggaz wit they gear and shyt....U betta get it together Nigga! Its over!"

ahhahahah what's up bunchy!...I see u son!...

07-15-2008, 05:27 PM	#1 (permalink)
Aril Problym Untouchable Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: 412 to 516 to 718 Posts: 3,365	BornKing (Acapella//Spoken word style)Birthed right into a cypher,Graffiti bomb then I'm born/ Umbilical mic cords,Life force without diapers then I'm born/ Hyper for a tight verse my third eye forms then I'm born/ Supply the cardboard,Wave from left to right arm and I'm born/ I do more than just type words,known fact I was born in the cypher/ Go back,Talent show rhyme reciter,Train bomber...Overnighter/ Flow raps,Freestyle and brag who's tighter,undercover writer/ I'm so that,Low jack and spit it loud like soul claps..Chaka Khan through the fire/ Throw back,Capitol was a co-signer til they found out I was a Rider not a biter/ Oh man,Reborn so now I'm just alittle bit wiser!! The King is here,Run these Mc's(Run Dmc)they call me sire!! (LETS GO!!!) (Beat comes in//Troubleman by Camp Lo instrumental) Chorus x 2[I got crumbs conversating Wanna know where Im at? The King aint fall off Roaches,Yall fall back! Tremors when I walk through rooms Yall felt that?! Alot of herbs fear me Yall smell that? The Problym ressurected Yall go run tell that!!] x 2 King with the crown,I'm the majestic enigma/ Paint audio pictures so now yall could see my sound/ The Flow pierce through ya flesh like hollowtips/ I'm Barrack,Yall Jesse that equals messy politics/ Cept my Cajunas stay in tact,My goons stay in back/ I'm to fly to be a thug...A sexy beetch! So I just rap! Take over mic's(Mike's) like 50's house in Conneticut/ Or Better yet burn the bitch down with out evidence/ I get off like when them crooked cops got acquitted/ Dont get it twisted,I got midget macs for you critics/ My Niggadom bigger son and the throne is off limits/ Ya whole steelo rented,Over due so now yall evicted/ Punches lift you high,Catch contact like a fatty blown/ KingBorn...The Problyms back yall...Daddys home!!!! __________________ *Free Boofie!Locked up for his loyalty!!* CO-SIGNED!! Last edited by Aril Problym; 07-15-2008 at 05:42 PM.

07-15-2008, 05:34 PM	#2 (permalink)
Aril Problym Untouchable Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: 412 to 516 to 718 Posts: 3,365	I spit this in a different style....uh....was listening to the old Camp Lo joint!!! Wrote this joint at like 3:00 am......cause thats when I'm most creative!! Wrote this in like a hour!! Yall knoooooooow.......Daddys home!!! __________________ *Free Boofie!Locked up for his loyalty!!* CO-SIGNED!!

07-16-2008, 01:30 AM	#3 (permalink)
DXavier23 Don Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: New York City Posts: 2,325	I do more than just type words,known fact I was born in the cypher/ Go back,Talent show rhyme reciter,Train bomber...Overnighter/ Flow raps,Freestyle and brag who's tighter,undercover writer/ I'm so that,Low jack and spit it loud like soul claps..Chaka Khan through the fire/ My Niggadom bigger son and the throne is off limits/ Ya whole steelo rented,Over due so now yall evicted/ - I enjoyed reading much of this drop. A lot of good internal wordplay mixed with metaphors and punches. I also like the way you structured this piece which added to its overall creativity. If you want constructive criticism, your content could be a little bit stronger to increase the level of your lyricism but based on the subject of this drop, everything was pretty much on point. Stay up homie. __________________ They say I'm all about murder murder and kill kill but what about Grind House and Kill Bill what about Cheney and Halliburton the back door deals on oil fields How is Nas the most violent person

07-16-2008, 03:46 PM	#4 (permalink)
Aril Problym Untouchable Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: 412 to 516 to 718 Posts: 3,365	thx homie propz coming!! __________________ *Free Boofie!Locked up for his loyalty!!* CO-SIGNED!!

07-17-2008, 05:16 PM	#5 (permalink)
Aril Problym Untouchable Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: 412 to 516 to 718 Posts: 3,365	^^^Must spread props before giving it to Dxavier23 again __________________ *Free Boofie!Locked up for his loyalty!!* CO-SIGNED!!

07-18-2008, 11:29 AM	#6 (permalink)
Tyme Lyne Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Still in VA ...Stressed out like a Mutha FUcka ! Posts: 4,518	bout tyme...aril problym! Bunchy! ....damn that shyt was crazy son...switchin up on em...it was like a song with the drum rolls and sticks beatin em stacks! the aril problym is home...that mutha fucka is Back!.... ill holla!... __________________ MY BOI CHEA! HOLLA AT ChA SIS !

07-19-2008, 10:24 AM	#8 (permalink)
Tyme Lyne Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Still in VA ...Stressed out like a Mutha FUcka ! Posts: 4,518	ahahahha...i dont know what i was on when i posted that ..lol Real Talk . __________________ MY BOI CHEA! HOLLA AT ChA SIS !

07-22-2008, 11:26 AM	#10 (permalink)
Tyme Lyne Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Still in VA ...Stressed out like a Mutha FUcka ! Posts: 4,518	nigga! u a bytch : in rileys voice. " how many times I gotta tell you!...Pokemons are the shyt nigga! U a bytch for callin out my homies like dat ....and that pink shyt! Nigga that's gangsta! that's what they rock...they be schoolin' niggaz wit they gear and shyt....U betta get it together Nigga! Its over!" ahhahahah what's up bunchy!...I see u son!... __________________ MY BOI CHEA! HOLLA AT ChA SIS ! Last edited by Tyme Lyne; 07-22-2008 at 11:30 AM.

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