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07-21-2008, 06:26 PM
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..::Thoughts::..
Everything now illestrates lost percepton, showing a false reflection To be honest here's another mistake one from life's less in/lesson This art, this game, this emotion, its all one pain You start, you frame, all this commotion in one name Without any shame, only one to take the blame Tried to comprehend,but ignorance seem to stay the same Self respect and ambition so thin sanded, no removal of this bandage Brought up tough, so there was no use of pamprage However you interpert this its going to be a change That so many place their faith in, or so hopelessly aim Dreams exsists in what we percieve,.... You can call it Allah, God, The Truth or.... Mystery There's many untouched paths that our souls travel Wether it be... grass, dirt, mud or gravel.... Just the begining journey of my thoughts... Within the path that I walk.... And before its to late, Conteract the fear that bottled inside this shell Sit for a spell, and contemplate being banished to hell Lots of room for doubt but that's what I do inside the silence In the chambers of my mind contemplating results of violence All yall do is give me projected ideas to rest my head on I sleep on what you say cause after your small talk, there's nothing I've fed on By my side you'll see the world in a whole new light My written response you smile at, while a records in rotation It spits 'your welcome in courtesy of your thoughts and imagination' *Thinking is a process of bringing thoughts to reality, from which we record in our memories*
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The sky keeps turning and mocking, and this pain is 'presumption' Why I hear my most personal news from the gurl my nigga 'fucking' But the lies in turn are nothing, but what I'm feeling is just 'bare' Cause the end of my time, Beanie said it best I can feel it in the 'air' |
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07-21-2008, 06:29 PM
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thats nice, decent drop, liked the topic.....
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07-22-2008, 09:34 AM
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Feeeeeeeeedd ^^^^^^^^^
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The sky keeps turning and mocking, and this pain is 'presumption' Why I hear my most personal news from the gurl my nigga 'fucking' But the lies in turn are nothing, but what I'm feeling is just 'bare' Cause the end of my time, Beanie said it best I can feel it in the 'air' |
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07-22-2008, 11:11 AM
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nice....a def poet!..I see you mz diamond...welcome to the lyrical lounge sweetie.....bout time we get another female in here...you are talented .I see that ...props Ma. stay active...
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07-22-2008, 12:50 PM
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^^ thanks... for the feed and the props... very much appreciated... and ima try to stay active...
More feed 
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The sky keeps turning and mocking, and this pain is 'presumption' Why I hear my most personal news from the gurl my nigga 'fucking' But the lies in turn are nothing, but what I'm feeling is just 'bare' Cause the end of my time, Beanie said it best I can feel it in the 'air' |
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07-23-2008, 07:17 PM
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Uppin for some feed
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The sky keeps turning and mocking, and this pain is 'presumption' Why I hear my most personal news from the gurl my nigga 'fucking' But the lies in turn are nothing, but what I'm feeling is just 'bare' Cause the end of my time, Beanie said it best I can feel it in the 'air' |
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07-23-2008, 07:28 PM
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Rap GodFather
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look ma....we not gonna spoil you and shyt...u gotta drop feed on other peoples joints in order to get feed....now get it poppin..
return the favor.
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07-27-2008, 07:10 PM
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This is the first I read from you. The wordplay is cool. The topic also was on point
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but what about Grind House and Kill Bill what about Cheney and Halliburton the back door deals on oil fields How is Nas the most violent person |
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