Not What You Used To

[AeroFX]

i got your bitch,
tell me what you gone do,
i got a full clip,
man, i'll put your window through,
we both home grown,
but i'm not what you used to,
i'm known local, its official now,
i killed your whole crew,

my trigger finger itch,
tell me what you gone do,
i slept with your bitch,
man, what i say is so true,
we both home grown,
but i'm not what you used to,
i'm known local, its official now,
its news to nobody, only the musics new,

i'm unpredictable, no formular i follow,
i might pop up, and spray some hollows,
write something a prostitute couldnt swallow,
got a short wick, i might blow,
i write my own shit, some of it cancerous,
jonestown imitant, jones himself couldnt handle this,
i cop cd's, absorb the dopest and give it back,
and like elvis, i could give a fuck i'm not black,

i got your bitch,
tell me what you gone do,
i got a full clip,
man, i'll put your window through,
we both home grown,
but i'm not what you used to,
i'm known local, its official now,
i killed your whole crew,

my trigger finger itch,
tell me what you gone do,
i slept with your bitch,
man, what i say is so true,
we both home grown,
but i'm not what you used to,
i'm known local, its official now,
its news to nobody, only the musics new,

lyrics based on intelligence,
a desire for relevance,
high level of competance,
i never play pussy cat dance tracks,
jump in the lounge on a dance mat,
i jump in the whip and lay people flat,
an attitude problem that cant let beef be settled,
until your hearts filled with hot metal,
and daz hit the gas hard, damn near breaks the pedal,

i got your bitch,
tell me what you gone do,
i got a full clip,
man, i'll put your window through,
we both home grown,
but i'm not what you used to,
i'm known local, its official now,
i killed your whole crew,

my trigger finger itch,
tell me what you gone do,
i slept with your bitch,
man, what i say is so true,
we both home grown,
but i'm not what you used to,
i'm known local, its official now,
its news to nobody, only the musics new,

weapons of mass disruption,
take the piss out of you,
like i just hooked up suction,
and replace your brain with bullets,
when you pull up at a junction,
quote me, remember me,
never be, my enemy,
or end up 6ft, below earth,
not a day goes by that i get worse,
even my mums regretting my birth,
cos i get amped up, like a bionic land mine victim,
cept i'm all in tact, on a mission,

i got your bitch,
tell me what you gone do,
i got a full clip,
man, i'll put your window through,
we both home grown,
but i'm not what you used to,
i'm known local, its official now,
i killed your whole crew,

my trigger finger itch,
tell me what you gone do,
i slept with your bitch,
man, what i say is so true,
we both home grown,
but i'm not what you used to,
i'm known local, its official now,
its news to nobody, only the musics new,

[*Mz.Diamond*]

I read it like 3 or 4 times to get the feel of this and I just couldn't.... idk why its just not all that great... for a text piece it wasn't creative at all,nor complex..or orignal which took away from enjoyment... out this whole piece honestly it was like 1 good line the rest were ehh.../ weak... maybe this would sound good over a really dope beat even then you would have to put a lot of emotion into and have just the right amount of swag to pull it off... I also think the hook/chorus could have been better too...

Basically what your drop was missing was orginality and creativity... b/c the concept is played and when you do a played concept you really have to set you piece away from everybody else's and thats when your orginality and creatvity come in and make your's better...

Dnt take any of this to heart just giving you honest feed keep writing and you'll elevate fam