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so its 08 yall....we still populatin wit all these spoiled bytches...always want shyt handed to them?....man its aggravatin seriously man......!....
fuck the luggages and the bag lady freaks.... getting nails and hair did...not every month but every week?!... fuck the garbage talkin bytches ... mindless chickens walk and switchin... like a blown up air head...a bobble barbie doll. that keeps bytchin' fuck the ..." I freeload a nigga quick" ....damn those broads be makin me sick.... dude feedin into they bullshyt like a lovesick prick.... fuck the queens..divas..bella donas..and the expensive chicks... scandalous fem's who love expensive whips.. they broke and don't have shyt... instead they use they looks to spend a dude chips... the nice role ...and beggin tip... getting kinda old ..givin off the lip.. these chicks wantin attention... looks like love and happiness is out of business... enough mouth draws in tension... crimson tides... these bytches like march! beware of the Ides... wit the blackbook and niggas on speed dial... usin em as spare tires ...and got em in an orderly profile... alphabetical...the broads I can see through... the glits and the wits... these bytches always scream "But Boo?!?" wow...lol ... see how these birds in 08 do... I be like madd skillz ...with these chicken heads in review... to be continued...
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For some reason thought it was gone be deeper... as a text piece this was decent it'll prolly sound better over a beat... I just thought the flow was choppy..might be me though...vocab was ight... lyrics was cool can see where you coming from... and the topic was executed thoroughly... could use a little complexity work... and more creativity... since this was text audio it'd be perfect how it is... all in all good drop... keep writing
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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Good creative shit as usual. Your flow was solid throughout
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fuck the luggages and the bag lady freaks....
getting nails and hair did...not every month but every week?!... fuck the garbage talkin bytches ... mindless chickens walk and switchin... like a blown up air head...a bobble barbie doll. that keeps bytchin' this was kool & refreshin to read... def didnt expect to see this from a chick's perspective |
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of course G_rated I aint a spoiled bytch....I will talk about how females act wit the quickness I grew up as a tomboy so what u expect ?....so pretty much my mentality is like a dudes perspective....a lil rough around the edges...but still will tell it like it is.....lol..can get grimy that's if I have to. and have common sense.
dat getting pumps every other day...polishin nails...dressing up trying to attract attention and shyt. only when I have to and its been hell for the past four days at this hotel im working at now at the front desk. I swear to god I want to scream...!lol...im just happier under the hood of a whip wit baggy pants and a tank top wearing an aunt jamimia scarf tied around my head...its comfortable...lol. but hey times getting rough ...and they were the only mutha fuckas that called ! fuck!...
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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The concept was dope .,realtalk i
m glad someone be spittin bout that topic more vocad woulda done this a bit better but eh still feelin it. |
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I bet u would u nasty fuck!...lol...hahahhaaahhaha...oh dayum....a repeat...from that picture battle photo looking like I crawled from underneath a rock...lol...
-ROUND 2!-[Pic Tournament] JDaKidd V. Liyah [Pic Tournament]-ROUND 2- hahahaha.....lol damn those were the days....
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Outlaw
Join Date: Aug 2008
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I can't stand spoiled bitches either, so i was feelin where u were coming from.. Although the vocab and complexity was poor. You could've been in more depth with complexity. The structure was inconssist was well, flow was mediocre. But overall decent drop.
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