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08-29-2008, 11:02 PM
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The Biography of Timothy Robinson
The Biography of Timothy Robinson October 31, 1985 The place... A Halloween Party, where the dominos are set... Where shame would fill the air laced with possible regret Because the two we're focused on probably never would've met If it wasn't for the sex... Better yet if it wasn't for the cess... A kid eyed the girl to whom he used to stalk... Had a sudden burst of courage as he went through acouple shots Acted on the emotion he probably should've fought And asked, "Do you wanna move into a quieter room so we could talk?" Now as far stories go... This is merely the start of shit Because the room they chose was so quiet... You could hear a condom rip June 13, 1986 The place... Mercy Hospital in Buffalo, New York... Where a 16 year old girl was struggling with birth It's funny how it works... This was never the plan He asked for her hand in marriage and she severed her hand... Because the Devil made her remember that horrible night... In her last seconds of life where she took a plunge towards the light And the boy somehow swore he heard the screams from the highway And their little 'Bundle of Joy' was born June 13th on a Friday This was the trend of his life... Seems 'Demise was in Style' Because all he heard is a flatline drowned by the cries of his Child January 18th, 2002 The place... In the closet, in his room locked up While his fathers lookin' for him through the bottom of a shot cup "Open the fuck up!"... is what he yelled as he tackled the door "It's to bad I didn't know then what a hanger is for!" Timmy was paralyzed... Watchin'... Through a crack boxed in... Like, "Fuck, a locked door is usually enough to stop him" After about five minutes of force... The hinges broke loose And his voice boomed, "Tonight, I'ma feed you the Sole Truth!" "Dad this is a mistake! You're drunk and faded too!" "Fuck that! The only drunken mistake I ever made was You!" January 19th, 2002 The place... In his room all that night he didn't sleep... But wondered instead Whether or not he was to blame... Because his mother is dead Flipped on the weather channel and noticed 'Thunder Ahead' And chuckled at the Irony as he reached for the gun under his bed He crept into his fathers room with his weaponary hidden And woke his dad like, "I can't let you leave until my message is given... If I told you, you could see her... Would you take the offer?" "Boy I'd fucking kill you for it since it's cuz of you I lost her" And as if on cue he pulled the gun up from under his cover And slightly muttered, "When I see her, I'll my mother you Love her" His father just stuttered and before he even figured to move... Timmy made the finishing move and the trigger was pulled... R.I.P Timothy Robinson 1985-2002 ------------------------------------------------- |
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08-30-2008, 03:00 AM
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Nerdy Athiest
 
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Man, what other sites have you posted on?
I know there must be others. That's just too dope to be a first drop.
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08-30-2008, 03:01 AM
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my dude kal still puttin it down.
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08-30-2008, 05:02 AM
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good story teller. on some slug shit.
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08-30-2008, 12:34 PM
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I've been on Datpiff but there was some Admin/Mod trouble so I moved to a smaller site. I've posted some shit on Braggin' Writes but that's about it. Thanks for the feed... |
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08-30-2008, 12:45 PM
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Nerdy Athiest
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Word? What was your name on BW? I post on there from time to time.
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08-30-2008, 01:21 PM
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Kalish
I didn't post much, though I wrote this acouple months ago and you should be able to find it in the Written section if you look hard enough, lol. Pretty sure it's dead now though |
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09-06-2008, 02:14 PM
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damn this shit is krazy.. good structure, nice detailed events.. steady flow.. you seem like an experienced writer.. good shit, lookin forward to readin some more of ya work...
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09-06-2008, 10:02 PM
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Man i wanna make this into an audio... if i get your premission ill give you credit for writing it, fuck stealing shit
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09-07-2008, 02:59 AM
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Mar 2006
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aight kal! my dude...u on that real talk shyt....I post shyt like this too reflects my life and shyt that goes on around me dats how I do.....but anyways...im glad u on rgf son...I feel where u coming from ...ill holla.
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