Just Some Random Shit...Feedback Please

[tru_hip_hop]

i used to come to this site just to download hot shit
but now its to get on the Open Mic and just spit
i aint gonna lie I dont smoke and roll blunts
dont get it twisted, Ill still crush all you cunts
who needs guns when i spit toxic venom
my rhymes will have you feelin blue like denim
im fly on the mic so bitches tend to get wet
they beggin to fuck me even though we just met
dont try and steal my lines so you can try to seem hot
thinkin you all gangsta and hard but really your not
come against me and get crushed just like a can
ill have you goin to war like my name was uncle sam
open up ya ears and mind when you listen
you'll see that im what the games been missin

[G-Rated]

Pretty good homie....Stay active.

[CyCo34]

^^^co-sign...that was nice