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SkeetOnBeezies · 10-06-2009, 06:31 PM

You think you're spittin knowledge
But all your shit is garbage
Just another nigga that thinks he's a straight prophet
Preachin bout how he pushed weight and made profit
The whole thug approach you goin for just drop it
Let's remain honest while we touchin on this topic
You glorify the violence as if you all applaud it
Am I the only one who lost a nigga to the nonsense?
My best friend turned seventeen back in August
He spent his birthday rottin away in a coffin
I wake up every morning with that pain on my conscience
Plagued with these conflicts, all day its constant
I'm tryna stay on the right path but it's hard when
We all got a price and my soul's up for auction
That's real talk son but all you know is gossip
So you don't see the problem, I'll reframe the picture
They give you food for thought marinated in liquor
It makes you alcoholics, awake but still unconscious
Oblivious to options, your common sense forgotten
Proud that your hood is more dangerous than Gotham
And fuck the police you hope the cops never stop it
On the bus muggin me cuz you ain't got shit
Thinkin you'd be able to run up into my pockets
Refresh your logic, pretend like God is watchin
I do this all too often and try to show em the light
But they're in love with the dark
So they won't open their eyes.

Yourself>Yourself
Cold World

SkeetOnBeezies · 10-13-2009, 12:19 AM

how come no one shows me love here?

GodsSon1 · 10-14-2009, 04:30 PM

I read this a few times actually, but I never commented. Pretty well written, I would leave out the first two lines. The last 4 bars were my favorite, the closer in particular. Nice work.

10-06-2009, 06:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
SkeetOnBeezies Criminal Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: SF Posts: 55 : 0 For This Post 0 Total	Get a Clue You think you're spittin knowledge But all your shit is garbage Just another nigga that thinks he's a straight prophet Preachin bout how he pushed weight and made profit The whole thug approach you goin for just drop it Let's remain honest while we touchin on this topic You glorify the violence as if you all applaud it Am I the only one who lost a nigga to the nonsense? My best friend turned seventeen back in August He spent his birthday rottin away in a coffin I wake up every morning with that pain on my conscience Plagued with these conflicts, all day its constant I'm tryna stay on the right path but it's hard when We all got a price and my soul's up for auction That's real talk son but all you know is gossip So you don't see the problem, I'll reframe the picture They give you food for thought marinated in liquor It makes you alcoholics, awake but still unconscious Oblivious to options, your common sense forgotten Proud that your hood is more dangerous than Gotham And fuck the police you hope the cops never stop it On the bus muggin me cuz you ain't got shit Thinkin you'd be able to run up into my pockets Refresh your logic, pretend like God is watchin I do this all too often and try to show em the light But they're in love with the dark So they won't open their eyes. Yourself>Yourself Cold World Last edited by SkeetOnBeezies; 10-07-2009 at 01:24 AM.

10-14-2009, 04:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
GodsSon1 Untouchable Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Charlotte, NC Posts: 3,384 : 0 For This Post 2 Total	I read this a few times actually, but I never commented. Pretty well written, I would leave out the first two lines. The last 4 bars were my favorite, the closer in particular. Nice work. __________________ My Request List l Do you fools listen to music or do you just skim through it?

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10-13-2009, 12:19 AM	#2 (permalink)
SkeetOnBeezies Criminal Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: SF Posts: 55 : 0 For This Post 0 Total	how come no one shows me love here?