DJ Superman & Jay-Z - Businesman vs. Street Legend

[Marcyville]

Unfinished (as far as the tracklisting and maybe a few final touches) because the tracklisting isn't done yet, but uh...

[Illmatic07]

its aight, but too many lil things let it down. text looks pretty bad, the render sizes of beyonce and rihanna make it look kinda rushed, and the briefcase looks random (is it in front of the text or spose to be on his hand?)

KIU

[jkn]

Potential but u bombed on a couple aspects.....c/s wit illmatic

[rs2000mk2]

naw..........the perception is all off, and so is half of jay'zs hand

[CLC]

Originally Posted by Illmatic07

its aight, but too many lil things let it down. text looks pretty bad, the render sizes of beyonce and rihanna make it look kinda rushed, and the briefcase looks random (is it in front of the text or spose to be on his hand?)

KIU

c/s

lmfaoooooooooooooo at the suitcase, work on blending too

[Krazye]

Originally Posted by rs2000mk2

the perception is all off, and so is half of jay'zs hand

fix that up. take the white border off an di rekon it will look much better. i personally like the text on this one.

KIU

[Scrilla]

Looks good except for the perception (girls way bigger than hov) and his hand being behind the suitcase. Other than that it's tight tho.

[anthomicbomber]

thatz pretty much it....u just need to blend tha renders more....and fix da suitcase

[Ghettostar]

suitcase looks stupid just sitin there...and the glow around all of them kills it...and the text looks very basic.

[CertifiedG]

Originally Posted by Illmatic07

its aight, but too many lil things let it down. text looks pretty bad, the render sizes of beyonce and rihanna make it look kinda rushed, and the briefcase looks random (is it in front of the text or spose to be on his hand?)

KIU

^^ Covers everything