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Varcity · 08-13-2007, 03:59 PM

this is my first flyer ever,i told dude but he aint care,and he was willin to throw da doe to me still so,obviously i aint care neither lol... dont be harsh

1987 · 08-13-2007, 04:36 PM

It's alright for a first. Aint really feelin the colors and some of the text

Marcyville · 08-13-2007, 04:51 PM

The colors save it since a flyer is supposed to be appealing & eye catching.

It's sloppy though and what purpose does Kanye serve on it?

It'll look better when printed though since that'll make it darker and what not, but it's ok.

Keep at it.

killer-rex · 08-13-2007, 05:55 PM

if kanye wasnt so big this would be better

Varcity · 08-14-2007, 01:31 AM

iono what kanye has to do wit it,but dude jus said he wanted kanye in it..and yes it is kinda sloppy cuz this nigga wanted 50/11 things in da shit..i tol em it wont fit but he aint care so i aint either

Slippin · 08-14-2007, 01:33 PM

actually i like it lol i like tha colors cause its catches ur eyese... looks like one of the flyers i be seein around here...

Stillmatic · 08-14-2007, 01:42 PM

nice colors

DUBPLATE_SPECIAL · 08-14-2007, 06:11 PM

i like the colors, not really feelin the type work, could be tighter, but i see the look u were going for, that 80's neon, all over the place look that seems to be in right now.

The type is way too close to your edges, u didn't leave enough room for the bleed, when its cut (if its printed exactly like this) some text will get cut off, u should leave all your text inset 0.25in, u can let your background image go right to the edges.

C.E.O. · 08-14-2007, 09:00 PM

its ok..would b better with better text and blending

bbgurl · 08-14-2007, 09:30 PM

He let some of that text fly??? Wow.....
Its okay, Kanye's pic is too HARD and bold, over shadows what the event is even about. But glad you made some $$$

08-13-2007, 03:59 PM	#1 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,225	First Flyer Eveeeer!! this is my first flyer ever,i told dude but he aint care,and he was willin to throw da doe to me still so,obviously i aint care neither lol... dont be harsh __________________ A&R's like Ray Charles in Space,they aint SEEING THIS STAR- Varcity Join The Movement

08-13-2007, 04:36 PM	#2 (permalink)
1987 Rap GodFather Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Midwest Posts: 4,487	It's alright for a first. Aint really feelin the colors and some of the text __________________ LOVES HIS TAMALE

08-13-2007, 04:51 PM	#3 (permalink)
Marcyville Don Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 2,410	The colors save it since a flyer is supposed to be appealing & eye catching. It's sloppy though and what purpose does Kanye serve on it? It'll look better when printed though since that'll make it darker and what not, but it's ok. Keep at it. __________________ Washingtons go to wifey you know how that go Jacksons go back to'em we coppin some more, the Bejamins go in stash box under the floor I'm out for presidents to represent me now you know...

08-13-2007, 05:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
killer-rex Thug Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 278	if kanye wasnt so big this would be better __________________

08-14-2007, 01:31 AM	#5 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,225	iono what kanye has to do wit it,but dude jus said he wanted kanye in it..and yes it is kinda sloppy cuz this nigga wanted 50/11 things in da shit..i tol em it wont fit but he aint care so i aint either __________________ A&R's like Ray Charles in Space,they aint SEEING THIS STAR- Varcity Join The Movement

08-14-2007, 01:33 PM	#6 (permalink)
Slippin Outlaw Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Midwest Posts: 145	actually i like it lol i like tha colors cause its catches ur eyese... looks like one of the flyers i be seein around here... __________________

08-14-2007, 01:42 PM	#7 (permalink)
Stillmatic Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Midwest Posts: 7,570	nice colors __________________

08-14-2007, 06:11 PM	#8 (permalink)
DUBPLATE_SPECIAL Rookie Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 1	i like the colors, not really feelin the type work, could be tighter, but i see the look u were going for, that 80's neon, all over the place look that seems to be in right now. The type is way too close to your edges, u didn't leave enough room for the bleed, when its cut (if its printed exactly like this) some text will get cut off, u should leave all your text inset 0.25in, u can let your background image go right to the edges. __________________ www.dubplate.ca www.myspace.com/dubplate_special www.myspace.com/brandish_design

08-14-2007, 09:00 PM	#9 (permalink)
C.E.O. Untouchable Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: 46 NHC Posts: 3,331	its ok..would b better with better text and blending __________________ W: 3-0

08-14-2007, 09:30 PM	#10 (permalink)
bbgurl Capo Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: DaVille Posts: 827	He let some of that text fly??? Wow..... Its okay, Kanye's pic is too HARD and bold, over shadows what the event is even about. But glad you made some $$$ __________________ BBGurl

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