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mmaster_po · 02-20-2008, 08:13 PM

still practicing my cover game, i was going for a cartonish look with this one

v.2

c&c

edit: v.2 added

Stillmatic · 02-20-2008, 08:18 PM

not feeling it, the girls look cartoon, while game looks normal, that look doesnt right, not feelin the floating money that cop car in the back is floating (add shadow), txt needs work, not really feelin the topaz on game

Ol' Dirty Mexikan · 02-20-2008, 08:19 PM

co sign wit everything

Scrilla · 02-20-2008, 09:03 PM

too much going on and the placement is weird

mmaster_po · 02-21-2008, 01:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stillmatic

not feeling it, the girls look cartoon, while game looks normal, that look doesnt right, not feelin the floating money that cop car in the back is floating (add shadow), txt needs work, not really feelin the topaz on game

gonna post a v.2 soon, thanks for the feedback Still, appreciate it dawg

Marcyville · 02-21-2008, 02:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stillmatic

not feeling it, the girls look cartoon, while game looks normal, that look doesnt right, not feelin the floating money that cop car in the back is floating (add shadow), txt needs work, not really feelin the topaz on game

Pretty much...it has potential though.

Stillmatic · 02-21-2008, 09:28 AM

v2 is a lot better but your txt still needs work

Marcyville · 02-21-2008, 10:05 AM

Yeah, too much lighting on the girls too.

zstranz · 02-21-2008, 12:11 PM

v2 looks good..not so sure about the text

Akay · 02-21-2008, 01:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ol' Dirty Mexikan

co sign wit everything

word lol..

02-20-2008, 08:13 PM	#1 (permalink)
mmaster_po Underboss Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Costa Rica, Latin 2 Death! Posts: 1,288	//New Cover, A Hustlas Dream still practicing my cover game, i was going for a cartonish look with this one v.2 c&c edit: v.2 added __________________ Last edited by mmaster_po; 02-21-2008 at 02:41 AM..

02-20-2008, 08:18 PM	#2 (permalink)
Stillmatic Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Midwest Posts: 7,533	not feeling it, the girls look cartoon, while game looks normal, that look doesnt right, not feelin the floating money that cop car in the back is floating (add shadow), txt needs work, not really feelin the topaz on game __________________

02-20-2008, 08:19 PM	#3 (permalink)
Ol' Dirty Mexikan Don Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: MiDWEST Posts: 2,667	co sign wit everything __________________

02-20-2008, 09:03 PM	#4 (permalink)
Scrilla Underboss Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: 718/201/508 Posts: 1,667	too much going on and the placement is weird __________________

02-21-2008, 09:28 AM	#7 (permalink)
Stillmatic Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Midwest Posts: 7,533	v2 is a lot better but your txt still needs work __________________

02-21-2008, 10:05 AM	#8 (permalink)
Marcyville Don Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 2,403	Yeah, too much lighting on the girls too. __________________ Washingtons go to wifey you know how that go Jacksons go back to'em we coppin some more, the Bejamins go in stash box under the floor I'm out for presidents to represent me now you know...

02-21-2008, 12:11 PM	#9 (permalink)
zstranz Rap GodFather Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Countdown County 321 Posts: 4,893	v2 looks good..not so sure about the text __________________ http://youtube.com/user/zstranz

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