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03-06-2008, 01:01 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
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i am jeezy - practice cover
 lemme know what ya think , crits n advice welcome n apreciated 1 |
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03-06-2008, 01:13 PM
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Capo
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ℓση∂ση
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aite man, nt feelin dis 1 at alllll. u jus need to keep practicing. blending is off, fence looks half done, money placement is aiteeeee, nt dun too well, n fuk tha smoke. u also need to chk ya text man. text looks shite too. need 2 use diff font/style 4 dis 1.
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03-06-2008, 01:23 PM
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: May 2007
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txt is rly baaad
smoke aint good either sorry not feelin it
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03-06-2008, 01:24 PM
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Midwest
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Txt Is Bad, The Focal Point Is So Off, The Smoke Needs To Go, Change The Bg, Get Rid Of The People Behind Jezzy, Lose The Fence
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03-06-2008, 01:57 PM
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Ehm Deeh
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you tried to do too much, and text is shit
blending is off too stay up..
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03-06-2008, 02:59 PM
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Soldier
Join Date: May 2006
Location: chi-city
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1991 plain fuckin hated, any how keep practicin homie, you'll get better!!!
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03-06-2008, 03:47 PM
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Thug
Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 236
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not feelin it. too much stuff goin on. keep practicin
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03-06-2008, 04:33 PM
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Don
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Chicago
Posts: 2,410
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smh@makin the silhouettes look bad.
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