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blackhawkent · 05-08-2008, 09:46 PM

any feedback?

G.A · 05-08-2008, 10:06 PM

flames on lower right corner ain't right.
work on the text.
you do know 911 in the song refers to 9-1-1, not 9/11 right?
why the war motif?

blackhawkent · 05-08-2008, 10:12 PM

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Originally Posted by G.A

flames on lower right corner ain't right.
work on the text.
you do know 911 in the song refers to 9-1-1, not 9/11 right?
why the war motif?

yea i know....its to show the only way to get change is by "fighting back"

Frequensy · 05-09-2008, 05:57 AM

the text is off.. it fucks up the whole flow and the flames look weird. work on that. its got potential tho

mmaster_po · 05-09-2008, 02:51 PM

text kill it

05-08-2008, 09:46 PM	#1 (permalink)
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G.A Underboss Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Cipher Birthplace of the West Coast 5% Posts: 1,785	flames on lower right corner ain't right. work on the text. you do know 911 in the song refers to 9-1-1, not 9/11 right? why the war motif? __________________ *PEACE! to the Gods & Earths*

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05-09-2008, 05:57 AM	#4 (permalink)
Frequensy Capo Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Looking for Hip-Hop Posts: 662	the text is off.. it fucks up the whole flow and the flames look weird. work on that. its got potential tho