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03-18-2007, 02:58 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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2 Covers//The Message v3//The Dose
The Message Volume 3 (Online Mixtape Coming Soon)
 The Dose Volume 1  Comments and critiscm, Ill add another version as soon as I get some good feed back
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03-18-2007, 03:54 PM
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the first one is fiya
the second one is wicked too where did u get the hands??
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03-18-2007, 03:58 PM
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Mar 2006
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The first one could have been made better imo. The second is real nice. Perspective is better on the second one than the first. Good job
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03-18-2007, 04:31 PM
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Untouchable
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Uhhh the first hand im willing to trade, second hand i got from Jah Wise avatar of Planet Asia album, i just manipulated it to my liking. Proped you if i could
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03-18-2007, 04:37 PM
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1st one- The perspective of the hand is off and the coloring is off. (the renders don't match) Try using adjustment layers.
2nd one- Looks pretty good. perspective and lighting is better. Text could use a little work and it looks a little plain. Also young buck looks out of place. KIU tho. All in all not too bad.
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03-18-2007, 04:39 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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buck looks like hes sliding down a stripper pole (no homo). i like the hand perspectives props
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03-18-2007, 04:55 PM
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Untouchable
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ok so
1) Hand perspective off, color dont go wit jay 2) Find better render of Buck or someone else....im good wit da text Im on it.....
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Yep, pretty nice covers though
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