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04-04-2008, 04:47 PM
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Criminal
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Ohio
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new beat . made with FL . prp for feeds
need feed back . trying hard to become better . tell me what i need . bad feed or good i dont care let me know up front .. thanks
http://www.zshare.net/audio/1005515427dbdf0a/
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04-05-2008, 01:39 AM
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Criminal
Join Date: Jan 2006
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not bad.. relax the bass a bit at the beginning, the piano is a lil but much but thats just my opinion, not bad tho mayne keep it up
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04-05-2008, 03:59 AM
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Don
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Pomona ~ The Original P-Town ~ a-la Shane Mosely & Dejuan Rice
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No offense, scratch it and start over. The sounds dont work well together at all IMO
But hey keep working.
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04-06-2008, 06:09 PM
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Rookie
Join Date: May 2007
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my opinion i think u should make the tempo on the beat faster and get rid of the piano, it sounds more like a crunk beat to me.
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04-06-2008, 06:11 PM
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Don
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Cloud 9
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Good Beat but cool down on the base in my opinion But keep grindin
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04-06-2008, 08:10 PM
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Criminal
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Ohio
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aright good looks yall
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04-07-2008, 01:36 PM
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Capo
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Detroit
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I dont like anything about the beat except the pianos. They are hot. Everything else....blah..
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04-07-2008, 08:03 PM
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Thug
Join Date: Dec 2005
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dont scrap the pianos, just give em some riddlen, they way to hype, and down load some new sounds, I like how it sounds wit just the bass n drums like half way thru but it would sound better wit a better instrument, and the synths have no swag.
very workable project tho, just keep at it
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04-14-2008, 02:06 PM
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Outlaw
Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 199
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it don't really have no kind of personality, like who can you hear spitting something to this beat, while allot of it is clever and that is to be admired, you need to leave a element that people can connect with. perhaps if you choose different drums, a harder hitting bass and a sweet clap, it could start to shape not only how if sound but how it feels.
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