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JcG4Life · 04-10-2008, 01:05 PM

http://www.zshare.net/audio/103338516f87ef7f/

will prop for feed back but i need to spread

INT · 04-10-2008, 01:30 PM

nice work
i like the structure
try to make it build up more
and let the transitions stand out
maybe some turnarond snares

but good work..repped

Exclusive314 · 04-10-2008, 02:36 PM

the synths sound good but that bassline is very annoying and the mannie fresh drum roll gets played out fast, switch it up. u should also add a clap

yunglil · 04-11-2008, 09:52 PM

i like the verse part, but those synths in the hook i dont, and the bass instrument could be better, and cosign on the mannie drums

JASP06 · 04-14-2008, 01:05 PM

I think all the part you have in the song are correct, are you processing any of the sound through effects? what are you using to make the beat?

04-10-2008, 01:05 PM	#1 (permalink)
JcG4Life Criminal Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Ohio Posts: 72	New Beat . Tryin Sum New Syths I just Got . Need Feed http://www.zshare.net/audio/103338516f87ef7f/ will prop for feed back but i need to spread __________________ http://www.myspace.com/123456543

04-10-2008, 01:30 PM	#2 (permalink)
INT Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: .:.:$<604>$:.:. Posts: 4,616	nice work i like the structure try to make it build up more and let the transitions stand out maybe some turnarond snares but good work..repped __________________ I N T BEATS THE MAN THAT I AM > http://www.zshare.net/audio/1356463387fa34a9/ WHAT YOU KNOW > http://www.zshare.net/audio/135644654898100b/

04-10-2008, 02:36 PM	#3 (permalink)
Exclusive314 Thug Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 259	the synths sound good but that bassline is very annoying and the mannie fresh drum roll gets played out fast, switch it up. u should also add a clap __________________ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EqUot7VE7oA

04-11-2008, 09:52 PM	#4 (permalink)
yunglil Thug Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 252	i like the verse part, but those synths in the hook i dont, and the bass instrument could be better, and cosign on the mannie drums __________________ Undoubtedly, jealousy is still surrounding me so come on sit down.... smoke a pound wit me..... DME representer Ill Lil www.dynastymusicentertainment.com www.myspace.com/dynastymusicent

04-14-2008, 01:05 PM	#5 (permalink)
JASP06 Outlaw Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 199	I think all the part you have in the song are correct, are you processing any of the sound through effects? what are you using to make the beat? __________________ !!OSX86 Inside!!

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