Need Help...can't tell if my shits wack or aite lol

[obsurd]

ha you know the deal, you make your own beat, and you always think its hot. Well i got noone around me to listen to it, so please just check it for me...its the first one i've done in a minute.

"The Departed"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...&content=music

PROPS!

[Grimy]

Pretty nice beat. I was expectin a turnaround drum on the end of every 2/4 bar, that would make it better, cos atm the drum pattern is just too bland.. like i'm waitin for the drums to change up but they dont

nice beat tho.

[obsurd]

hey dog...what the hell is a tournaround drum? drop a drum right after the snare? props for the feed though man i appreciate it

[Thirty23Productions]

Originally Posted by Grimy

Pretty nice beat. I was expectin a turnaround drum on the end of every 2/4 bar, that would make it better, cos atm the drum pattern is just too bland.. like i'm waitin for the drums to change up but they dont

nice beat tho.

I hear what you are saying and I agree, It's one of those things like your head bobs to a certain beat, and there's an extra bob between the drum kick.

That's just a suggestion though, you have something good on your hands.

[obsurd]

I appreciate the feed for sure...im gonna go back and mess with the drum pattern a lil bit and i'll update it for yall...major props

[www.pottstreet.com]

Props man, I liked it... agree it could use that extra little bop in the drums.

Gus