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06-17-2008, 12:19 AM
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Rookie
Join Date: Nov 2007
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New Club hit, show some luv and listen for a minute...
This is what i got for my first day on this project, everythings original, the intro is kinda lame, i just put something to fill in. i know m missing some stuff, i need some pointers. thanks fam
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06-17-2008, 03:47 AM
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Thug
Join Date: Mar 2007
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Its not bad, I like from about 0:50 on. Wouldn't say it sounded like a club banger if thats what you were going for. The melody seems off for some reason, not sure what its missing. I like the synth sound though. The drums need to be tightened up a bit as well, start with the kick.
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06-17-2008, 06:37 AM
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Outlaw
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Norway
Posts: 125
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it needs work, you need to fix the kick & snare. but its got potential
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06-18-2008, 12:30 AM
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Untouchable
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Massachusetts
Posts: 3,299
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Fix the drum pattern and you're in the money.
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06-18-2008, 01:33 AM
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Join Date: Mar 2007
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It's all about the beat and melody workin as one.
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