New beat! Just messin around wit it

[siike]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/14978964add84d90/
I DONT EVEN KNOW LOL

[AR15]

the thing i notice about ur beats, u know how to switch it up alot (which is good) but the things u put in just dont fit the melodies, and the meledies aint too good either... try makin a dope ass lil tune, even if it takes u like a half hour still make sure that shits sick, then start addin some other sounds, then make ur drums hit on ur melodies (u get what i'm tryin to say?), dont just throw anything in there...

hope i helped... an i'll be check'n in to see what u drop...

peaCe

[maniak]

yeah co-sign with AR15 needs a little more attention and you could have something dope on ur hands but keep doing ur thang homie

[Grimy]

Originally Posted by AR15

the thing i notice about ur beats, u know how to switch it up alot (which is good) but the things u put in just dont fit the melodies, and the meledies aint too good either... try makin a dope ass lil tune, even if it takes u like a half hour still make sure that shits sick, then start addin some other sounds, then make ur drums hit on ur melodies (u get what i'm tryin to say?), dont just throw anything in there...

hope i helped... an i'll be check'n in to see what u drop...

peaCe

Yep, he said it right there. Also, when you got a melody going over the main melody, if it's off key it's gonna sound ... ughhh..... so try keepin all the notes on the white key, or all notes on the black key, unless ur main melody is usin both black and white keys, cos it sounds mad off key if u dont