tell me whay you think of my beats

[fatdan]

yo been making beats for 10 months looking for feedback on my beats . so feel free to say what ever on your mind. negative or positive don't give me no soft stuff tell me what you really feel. if you like it tell me why you like.if you did tell me why you did.did you like the way i programed the drums or did you like the sample did you like the feel of the track.if you did'nt like it tell me why. was the sample wack the drums are of beat tell me why you did'nt like it so i know what got to do to get better belive it or not when make beats the feedback is usuals whats in my mind so it always makes me better so be harsh be kind but tell me what your hearts says .


http://www.zshare.net/audio/146410612da70040/ http://www.zshare.net/audio/146410741b67c320 http://www.zshare.net/audio/1464112038a89a09/ http://www.zshare.net/audio/146411402d19369c/ http://www.zshare.net/audio/14641181eb773982/ http://www.zshare.net/audio/14641597c69d8f2e/


freestyle
http://www.futureproducers.com/forum...d.php?t=256050

http://www.futureproducers.com/forum...d.php?t=253467

you don't have to listen to it all just give you a variety

[Scrilla]

allireallywanted.mp3- too choppy sounding. a bassline and drumline to match up to the choppy melody would make this decent tho. listen to some premo joints to get an idea of what i mean

buggsjones-1.mp3- the sample work is aiite, but again the drums and bass don't follow the feel of the sample

captain.mp3- has potential...change that hi-hat tho.


a lot of times shits best kept simple. you got some nice melodies, but you gettin a lil to extra with some of the drum lines. try simplifyin some of that shit and u prolly got some nice beats to work with