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Grimy · 07-11-2008, 01:30 PM

Screwed hook... probably my first... i dunno

hasnt been mixed down properly cos my headphones broke and i'm makin beats through a shitty computer speaker now temp :/

feedback plz

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1512032362ae3654/

**Varcity** · 07-11-2008, 02:15 PM

that guy sayin hustla voice is fucked up ....but this beat is tuff,gud shit Grimey

King_Boo_Joo · 07-11-2008, 04:15 PM

would be sick

but those crash thingys you doin gotta stop and the intro sounded silly....proped ya for the effort coz you could easily make that a good beat

Scrilla · 07-11-2008, 04:20 PM

not feelin this one too much. the melody seems to go offa key at parts and the sample sounds a lil muted.

Grimy · 07-11-2008, 06:04 PM

good looks everybody, gon fix shit up now

props

**G-Rated** · 07-15-2008, 01:09 PM

shit you deserve props for pullin this off this well usin pc speakers lol... but tha arrangement is off.. some of ya sounds are workin against tha overall sound of tha beat.. turn that cymbal down a bit, crash sounds are like salt.. season to taste, should bring out tha sound not overpower it (why im talkin bout food idk but yes, i am hungry rite now

).. i see what u went for... with a few minor adjustments, you got a hot joint...

07-11-2008, 02:15 PM	#2 (permalink)
Varcity SKULL GANG Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 5,871	that guy sayin hustla voice is fucked up ....but this beat is tuff,gud shit Grimey __________________ http://forum.rapgodfathers.com/tha-b...f-mixtape.html DOWNLOAD MY MIXTAPE YEA,IM WRITING IN A LAVENDER COLOR..SO WHAT"LAVENDER LIFESTYLE" WILL BE OUT SOON

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Scrilla Underboss Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: 508/201 Posts: 1,727	not feelin this one too much. the melody seems to go offa key at parts and the sample sounds a lil muted. __________________ click for gfx--><--click for beats

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07-11-2008, 04:15 PM	#3 (permalink)
King_Boo_Joo Capo Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: LDN Posts: 811	would be sick but those crash thingys you doin gotta stop and the intro sounded silly....proped ya for the effort coz you could easily make that a good beat

07-15-2008, 01:09 PM	#6 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,236	shit you deserve props for pullin this off this well usin pc speakers lol... but tha arrangement is off.. some of ya sounds are workin against tha overall sound of tha beat.. turn that cymbal down a bit, crash sounds are like salt.. season to taste, should bring out tha sound not overpower it (why im talkin bout food idk but yes, i am hungry rite now ).. i see what u went for... with a few minor adjustments, you got a hot joint...