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JustBlaze3 · 07-24-2008, 08:52 AM

Alright i made this beat in an hour...

so how is it....

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1588089135ad0696/

much better...........

Punishment07 · 07-24-2008, 01:51 PM

ok, ok...you got me. But for real if you take out that guitar/string plucking and sync the drum beat with the little melody (almost sounds like chimes) you got, it would be alright.

504BANGA · 07-25-2008, 09:10 PM

sounds like some scary nightmare music.

You to find a sense of scale so you can know how to organize. It'll come naturally if you keep trying. It's deff better than other shit you posted tho

sparxx · 07-25-2008, 10:56 PM

lol, i can hear a rza type of shit in there but u killed it with all the nonsence

**G-Rated** · 07-26-2008, 08:14 AM

work on assembling all tha sounds together.. tha beat should be structured so that everything sounds smooth & meshed.. alot of ya sounds are all over tha place with no direction... keep at it like banga said itll come more natural to ya...

07-24-2008, 08:52 AM	#1 (permalink)
JustBlaze3 Untouchable Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: caLifornia Posts: 3,089	Need Feedback-Way More Improvement......................... Alright i made this beat in an hour... so how is it.... http://www.zshare.net/audio/1588089135ad0696/ much better........... __________________ I'm Ready To Die without a Reasonable Doubt smoke Chronic and hit it Doggystyle before I go out Until they sign my Death Certificate It's All Eyez On Me I'm still at it, Illmatic and thats the Documentary BWS. Ice Cube. DPG. Ya Boy. Cyssero. Dubb. Jay Rock. Brotha Lynch. C-Bo. Crooked I.

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Punishment07 Underboss Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: VA 804 to 703 Posts: 1,233	ok, ok...you got me. But for real if you take out that guitar/string plucking and sync the drum beat with the little melody (almost sounds like chimes) you got, it would be alright. __________________

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504BANGA New Orleans 4 Life Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The Studio Posts: 6,360	sounds like some scary nightmare music. You to find a sense of scale so you can know how to organize. It'll come naturally if you keep trying. It's deff better than other shit you posted tho __________________

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07-25-2008, 10:56 PM	#4 (permalink)
sparxx Criminal Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 67	lol, i can hear a rza type of shit in there but u killed it with all the nonsence

07-26-2008, 08:14 AM	#5 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,508	work on assembling all tha sounds together.. tha beat should be structured so that everything sounds smooth & meshed.. alot of ya sounds are all over tha place with no direction... keep at it like banga said itll come more natural to ya...