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12-23-2006, 12:37 PM
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What do you all think?
nas song who killed it just inspired me to write some lyrics of my own can some of you give some feedback thanks anyway. p.s. oh yeah i'm from london so the slang you might not understand but oh well.
My names joel antoine-wilkinson raised in the streets of islington it's the northside slums hip-hop's almost finished like in a videogame health bar deminished i'm also known as iron tounge but i ain't got an iron lung that's made from gold hip-hops on sale industry bought it now it's sold i'm gonna tell you the tale of how hip-hop was born rapped and sold now let the story unfold... Kool herc met a buff chick said what's up and touched hop on her hip took a likeing to herc so they kissed on the lip a few years later she gave birth to something greater to many young blacks it was a life saver now young hip-hop made alot of friends around the time they were strong trends mc-ing, graffiti, b-boys and dj-ing all went in the same crew and they just grew and grew one new friend was led by an mc called run but before there was an mc who could do an incredible sum he went by the name of rakim at the end of the story they lyrics he spun you will probably miss em as you can tell hip-hop was a rappers delight but these days it's gotten old and lost it's sight don't worry ill get back to that but once it was all bout gangsta rap young hip-hop became a bully at school the police didn't like him not at all but he chilled back and became clever because there was a new kid his name was nas the lyrics were ill and the flow automatic the number of new york rappers increasing was like humping rabbits now there was a girl that two guys really like so much they even had a fight one boys name was wallace the other shakur they had a fight each day it got vicious more and more until shakur's boy knight wanted the girl for himself so got shakur and wallace taken out now that was done and dealt hip-hop graduated with full degrees there was mysterious group who became his favourite emcees wu-tang clan was the name of the band hip-hop is now slightly grown and street corners is what he now calls home he then heard eminem for the first time didn't know a white boy who could really rhyme but finally hip-hop got a job but seriously mr.scope rapped him black male and even digrate him mr.scope said and put a gun to scared hip-hop's head tell anyone and you'll be dead Hip-hop couldn't take it so he became a slob got lazy and now only listens tunes produced by jd so he leant wid it and he rocked wid it it was ok until he stopped paying the rent but the land owner was a gangsta hip-hop's boy fifty cent said he was a wanksta but the land owner ran up in the house guns blazing what more can i say but it was simply amazing he oozed hip-hop albums from his spine reminded us of times disgraceful and devine hip-hop is now in critical condition in the hospital jaw is the surgeon to bring hip-hop back that's my mission. if you have any questions your welcome to ask and i will apreciate feedback i hope you like it and it took me about 10 mins. Last edited by hip hopz finest; 12-23-2006 at 04:50 PM.. |
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12-23-2006, 03:22 PM
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bump lease. leave your opinion i want to kno what you think
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12-23-2006, 03:36 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2006
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dawg as kool as you sound as and as much as you are a nas stan.. along with like majority of the site, no one is gunna read all dat, sorry
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12-23-2006, 03:38 PM
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Fuck Nas. - Real Talk
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