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Underboss
Join Date: Mar 2007
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/30542877ad93a5/
i know the beginning is too loud and my echo is weird but i'm working on it, some input please maybe pointers or ideas, second verse in the works, beats from Mister KA, homie's hot no homo trying to get it as nice as poss so i can send it to him soon |
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Outlaw
Join Date: Jun 2007
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Yo, good track. Lyrics fit beat very well. Only thing I would say is try to get your emotion out more. I know that's hard since somtimes with that the mic will get all distorted. To solve that problem, you can try to double layer the vocals. Besides that, deep shit and good flow.
Hit me up so we can get that collabo goin homie.
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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we should do a 3 way collab ^^, no homo
nice shit tho homie, im listenin to it now |
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and ive heard this beat before, its sick, who produces it
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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EDIT: nvm its from mister ka lol nice beat, your flow is ridiculously good as always homie, lyrics feat the beat perfectly and are deep, deep/dope track, finish it so i can nominate that shit for the track of the week/month in tha booth here, nice work homie!
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Watts
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this shit is better than ja rule wack song uh oh (not sayin that it sucks), good job, beat is sick as fuck, send me a pm with the full track when it is finish
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Underboss
Join Date: Mar 2007
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added the second verse one more to go, I'm going to finish this and then start on the collabs just kindof hard to find time been working a lot, just one more verse for my other brother Pedro who died from heroin too not from a overdose but from a really bad blood clot and H.I.V. caused from a needle, all tru shit no made up shit so it kind of gets to me too u know but we must go on
http://www.zshare.net/audio/3082794e614066/ some feed please hopefully will be done this weekend |
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