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Re-FlOw · 08-25-2007, 04:51 AM

Hi, im new in these board! I am from Germany and i want to present you my music!

The track called "Battle 4 Myspace" its one months old

here you can listen to:

www.myspace.com/reflowrap

You can add me to your friedlist, too!!

Sus_Boi · 08-25-2007, 05:24 AM

flow geht in ordnung,aber halt noch stark ausbaufähig, text ist halt battle, aber passt. reime gehen durchwegs klar.
teilweise kommt flow halt noch unsicher rüber, teilweise fehlt auch der druck in der stimme z.B. bei "Game Over" !

aber bleib dran und mach weiter!

translation:

Flow is ok, but still improvable. i dont really like battle style, but it´s ok. try to find more topics.
flow is no not always convictive, sometimes there is too little pressure in your voice (e.g. "Game Over")

but keep on doing your music!

Re-FlOw · 08-25-2007, 06:13 AM

Jo, Thx!! Game Over is auch noch älter der track

Game Over ist von mai

Translation:

Jo, thanks!! Game Over is older then Battle 4 Myspace!

Game Obver is from may

Re-FlOw · 08-25-2007, 03:15 PM

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08-25-2007, 04:51 AM	#1 (permalink)
Re-FlOw Rookie Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 11	GERMAN RAP: Battle 4 Myspace!! LISTEN PLS Hi, im new in these board! I am from Germany and i want to present you my music! The track called "Battle 4 Myspace" its one months old here you can listen to: www.myspace.com/reflowrap You can add me to your friedlist, too!!

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08-25-2007, 05:24 AM	#2 (permalink)
Sus_Boi Rookie Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Salzburg, Austria, Europe Posts: 15	flow geht in ordnung,aber halt noch stark ausbaufähig, text ist halt battle, aber passt. reime gehen durchwegs klar. teilweise kommt flow halt noch unsicher rüber, teilweise fehlt auch der druck in der stimme z.B. bei "Game Over" ! aber bleib dran und mach weiter! translation: Flow is ok, but still improvable. i dont really like battle style, but it´s ok. try to find more topics. flow is no not always convictive, sometimes there is too little pressure in your voice (e.g. "Game Over") but keep on doing your music!

08-25-2007, 06:13 AM	#3 (permalink)
Re-FlOw Rookie Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 11	Jo, Thx!! Game Over is auch noch älter der track Game Over ist von mai Translation: Jo, thanks!! Game Over is older then Battle 4 Myspace! Game Obver is from may

08-25-2007, 03:15 PM	#4 (permalink)
Re-FlOw Rookie Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 11	Please More Feedback