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Old 08-29-2007, 11:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Maniak ft Brazilian Mobsta and The Author - Lord Listen

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For those that don't go into the Mixtape Thread this is the newest track that'll be on it, Beat by E.P. aka Epik artist verses order has listed in title

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Old 08-29-2007, 11:30 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 08-29-2007, 11:50 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 08-29-2007, 06:23 PM   #5 (permalink)
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This is my edit. (if yall noticed my verse wuz off beat)
Ey maniak, see if its ok like this, I put everything together editing my verse on the right place.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/3377900fa1b863/
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Old 08-29-2007, 09:25 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I think the first one on this page, maniak's edit, makes your flow sound more smooth and synced up to the beat.
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Old 08-29-2007, 09:32 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Yea, I dunno how to sync or blend the voice wit the instrumental.
Matter of fact, if anybody know any good voice-instrumental blendin vst or sumthin like that, Im lookin for somethn like that.

But my flow on that other one was put forward a bit, and some of the verses stayed good but the other ones were all over the place lol.

This the verse in acappella version
http://www.sendspace.com/file/hcpft3
if u or maniak wanna put that on the instrumental wit some propper settings but on the right tempo, i'd appreciate it.
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Old 08-29-2007, 09:40 PM   #8 (permalink)
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hmmm, you can try to send maniak your verse again cuz i kinda get what youre talkin about, but i def think the first version on this thread is synced up better. if i'm thinkin correctly, you mean the second half of your verse is a little behind the beat which i can see. but i'm sure maniak can speed that up if you want. i think the first part is good tho. PM him and see what he thinks.
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Old 08-29-2007, 09:49 PM   #9 (permalink)
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See it look weird on that one cuz of the flow I tried doin, a lil bit normal and a lil bit melodic. On the melodic it went over lol.
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Old 08-29-2007, 10:02 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Nice track. Concept was coo. I enjoyed Maniak, and The authors verses the most. The Authors flow is ON-POINT. Second verse mic quality was kind of bad but I can look past that. Coo track all together, turned out good.
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