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Underboss
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 1,359
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Day 1 of new music week for me:
heres the story theres a skit listen to it if u want track starts at 1 18 for the skit haters just fuckin around..lol this is me and my homie Ri$k alot of people seem to enjoy but over here theres a different perspective so feed back is appreciated negative or positive mr. me too.mp3 - 4.45MB
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Conartist
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 10,406
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at Risk voice, sound like he was a lil blazeBut anyway, I like the toliet sample, but yea, you should work on the flow, but your concepts was fresh, I like the I aint talk to George Washington line too, good. I didn't like Risk verse more than yours, but the flow was better, but still, this not one of ya better tracks Ballin in my Backpack >>> This track (FYI: To help ya flow, I suggest you like count from 1 to 4, but thats just me, people say my flow wack on here but thats just me) Nice Track ![]() |
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Soldier
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 593
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Haha skit was funny..
first dude wasnt riding the beat too well. but lyrics were aiight. Overall you can definitely get better. no doubt keep it up second dude: mclovin made me giggle.. rode the beat a bit better .. lyrics werent too bad.. has potential Overall Id say this was a pretty cool concept, however yall need to keep working on what you already have.. Shit will definitely come together. -NiqNaq, the Item
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Banned
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: southtown, north east
Posts: 1,356
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eh this wasn't really that good of a track, not to hate but to be honest. the rhymes weren't that good. the flow was mumbled, the enthusiasm needs work, the skit was eh.
3/4 outta 10 sry, im just critiquing |
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Underboss
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 1,359
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thanks naq jada and 912
@jda wait till i put up the next track lol theres a flow wtf is with kenny chesney thanx naq yeah im still workin on perfecting the flow and 9 12 i guess i can see where your coming from....umm yeah 3/4 of a vote
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