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Underboss
Join Date: Mar 2007
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Whats up yall this is actually a track a recorded a few months back but i guess i never posted it up for your feedback.
I made this track to sound like a quiet, layed back track. It actually made some noise in my school for a while. People would come up to me and tell me that they would play it when they were feeling down about life. It was a different track then the type i usually make, especially my delivery style Anyways check it out and all comment are appreciated! zSHARE - if i were to die today final.mp3 My Links: New Song For 08 Varcity - Something You Forgot
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Gangster
Join Date: Nov 2006
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the beat was country lol your flow needs some work, you were on and off the beat the whole way
but the topic was good, felt the lyrics |
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Underboss
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: where dem byrds be
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Uncle Kracker? Nelly? nah man beat, flow and pitch did not match but u try so I'll give u props for tring but nah didn't fell the Track IMO
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: sin city
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i really liked it, i told you that i think
check out in$anity ft windyman22 comin soon ya heard
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Underboss
Join Date: Mar 2007
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Thanks for the comments guys
Yeah i know the flow is off it was meant to sound a lil sloppy the lyrics and vibe is what i was aiming for Thanks for the comments
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Underboss
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Boston
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I actually really liked it... you def got some talent man.
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Rap GodFather
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reminds me of this song:
YouTube - LFO
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yo i felt that shit b...i been wanting to do a concept liek this for a looong time but never get to it..cuz i think how life will be if i die today EVERYDAY nah mean,so this fits in my genre..it's a lil country and all that but it sounds like u got the voice for it..i can hear this on the radio on them pop stations for real,gud shit
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Underboss
Join Date: Mar 2007
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Thanks for the comments guys!
propped all of ya that took the time to listen!
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