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Old 12-29-2007, 07:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Whats up yall this is actually a track a recorded a few months back but i guess i never posted it up for your feedback.

I made this track to sound like a quiet, layed back track. It actually made some noise in my school for a while. People would come up to me and tell me that they would play it when they were feeling down about life.

It was a different track then the type i usually make, especially my delivery style

Anyways check it out and all comment are appreciated!



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Old 12-29-2007, 10:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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the beat was country lol your flow needs some work, you were on and off the beat the whole way

but the topic was good, felt the lyrics
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Old 12-30-2007, 02:56 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Uncle Kracker? Nelly? nah man beat, flow and pitch did not match but u try so I'll give u props for tring but nah didn't fell the Track IMO
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Old 12-30-2007, 08:19 AM   #4 (permalink)
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i really liked it, i told you that i think

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Old 12-30-2007, 01:56 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments guys

Yeah i know the flow is off it was meant to sound a lil sloppy the lyrics and vibe is what i was aiming for

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I actually really liked it... you def got some talent man.
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Old 01-01-2008, 01:59 AM   #7 (permalink)
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reminds me of this song:
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yo i felt that shit b...i been wanting to do a concept liek this for a looong time but never get to it..cuz i think how life will be if i die today EVERYDAY nah mean,so this fits in my genre..it's a lil country and all that but it sounds like u got the voice for it..i can hear this on the radio on them pop stations for real,gud shit
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Thanks for the comments guys!

propped all of ya that took the time to listen!
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no prob.
btw the song is hott sounds like somethin ud hear on the radio
keep up the good work!!
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