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E & J · 12-30-2007, 06:52 PM

the come upmp3.mp3 - 5.68MB

Heres a new link, figured out how to make it so the song just plays, don't have to download

The homie Donte on first verse, me on second, third is the homie J.Joseph feedback appreciated

beat by Mart85

links to my feedback

can i live holla at me
cold winter

pimpshit187 · 01-03-2008, 06:57 PM

Yup yup shits bangin bro!!!

krayzplaya · 01-04-2008, 09:33 AM

i like to review while is listen
beat is nice
the first guy need to turn the vocals up
hook is fire
2nd guy need to adjust eq on the highs and bring it down a lil bit but other then that shit was good
again hook is fire
3rd verse was good, im assumin its the guy that was on the hook, i can hear the feelin in his voice

E & J · 01-04-2008, 01:01 PM

thanks for the feedback ya'll

krazyplaya - i agree wit ya 100%, still gettin my mixdown game correct, gotta get myself some monitors sometime

**G-Rated** · 01-04-2008, 09:05 PM

i luv dat laid back burnin type beat.. shits real smooth. hook is dope mayn... delivery/flow & tha content is perfect for tha tone of this joint... dat changeup delivery is tyte on dat hook...

1st dood: delivery was borin.. needs more emotion
2nd dood: kool flow/delivery, rhyme scheme wasnt too complex but it was nice...
3rd dood: this nigga killed it... delivery is tyte, good vocal presence... lyrics were on cue with tha 'come up' tone

bangin joint mayn...

maniak · 01-05-2008, 10:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by G-Rated

i luv dat laid back burnin type beat.. shits real smooth. hook is dope mayn... delivery/flow & tha content is perfect for tha tone of this joint... dat changeup delivery is tyte on dat hook...

1st dood: delivery was borin.. needs more emotion
2nd dood: kool flow/delivery, rhyme scheme wasnt too complex but it was nice...
3rd dood: this nigga killed it... delivery is tyte, good vocal presence... lyrics were on cue with tha 'come up' tone

bangin joint mayn...

co-sign 100% Props to all 3 of ya

12-30-2007, 06:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
E & J Criminal Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: MN Posts: 91	The Come Up the come upmp3.mp3 - 5.68MB Heres a new link, figured out how to make it so the song just plays, don't have to download The homie Donte on first verse, me on second, third is the homie J.Joseph feedback appreciated beat by Mart85 links to my feedback can i live holla at me cold winter __________________ :emo001: Last edited by E & J; 12-31-2007 at 11:51 AM..

01-03-2008, 06:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
pimpshit187 Criminal Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Utrecht, The netherlands and Pittsburg, California Posts: 91	tight shit Yup yup shits bangin bro!!!

01-04-2008, 09:33 AM	#3 (permalink)
krayzplaya Capo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Down South Texas Made Posts: 647	i like to review while is listen beat is nice the first guy need to turn the vocals up hook is fire 2nd guy need to adjust eq on the highs and bring it down a lil bit but other then that shit was good again hook is fire 3rd verse was good, im assumin its the guy that was on the hook, i can hear the feelin in his voice __________________ Http://www.myspace.com/countdownclique more then a group we a family -R3D

01-04-2008, 01:01 PM	#4 (permalink)
E & J Criminal Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: MN Posts: 91	thanks for the feedback ya'll krazyplaya - i agree wit ya 100%, still gettin my mixdown game correct, gotta get myself some monitors sometime __________________ :emo001:

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01-04-2008, 09:05 PM	#5 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,734	i luv dat laid back burnin type beat.. shits real smooth. hook is dope mayn... delivery/flow & tha content is perfect for tha tone of this joint... dat changeup delivery is tyte on dat hook... 1st dood: delivery was borin.. needs more emotion 2nd dood: kool flow/delivery, rhyme scheme wasnt too complex but it was nice... 3rd dood: this nigga killed it... delivery is tyte, good vocal presence... lyrics were on cue with tha 'come up' tone bangin joint mayn...