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Gangster
Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 351
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Yo its ya boy Mike Game, been appreciating all the feedback Ive been gettin as of late. But I need yal on this one. Its a track called "Dont Know" from my groups cd "Members Only". We got a show coming up, and they stressed that we have club friendly material. And I wont front, I hate doin club tracks. But heres my attempt, let me know what yal think. And yes, I did boast part of the hook from 50 Cent, only shit I could think of to this beat.
dont know.mp3 - 3.54MB And some feedback Ive left: Can I Live & Holla at Me Aien - Almost Over
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not feelin tha beat.. flow/delivery aint good on this joint, everything seems forced... hook aint catchy enuff for a club joint IMO & its too wordy in places kuz you rushin ya delivery here n there...
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Capo
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Down South Texas Made
Posts: 647
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ill write while i listen
the beat is aight could be club the hook is off flow is aight needs more feelin/fillers bars seem short need better ad libs keep workin at it, this could be a hot joint i say u switch the hook up to be more female oriented i.e. "make it work girl, let me see you move" or some shit like that
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