S-killz and A.L.P. 4 New Tracks...Want Feedback

[skakembo]

With the current state of the rap game these days its up to the underground artists to keep it real, so shoutout to all y'all.Pretty much the some of the first songs i ever recorded. Let me kno what yall think

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[krayzplaya]

zshare would be nice and i think u spost to review other peoples before you put urs on here. dont really matter to me.
if u post up zshare links ill listen and let u know what i think

R3D

[maniak]

Originally Posted by krayzplaya

zshare would be nice and i think u spost to review other peoples before you put urs on here. dont really matter to me.
if u post up zshare links ill listen and let u know what i think

R3D

co-sign Zshare it and I'll listen and leave feed, but u got to put up 2 links to feed u left for each track so if u got 4 u got to leave 8 links, not to hard to do since there's like 30 songs u can leave feed on that probably have had none

Do that and I promise I'll check it out and leave feed

[skakembo]

Im not really sure what you mean by putting two links for each track:S...but i will put them onto zshare instead.

zSHARE - a.l.p kakembo - what it once was.mp3

zSHARE - a.l.p kakembo - stay on our job.mp3

zSHARE - a.l.p ft. kakembo - tellin you.mp3

zSHARE - a.l.p kakembo - unstoppable 07.mp3

zSHARE - simon 2.mp3

Done and done...let me kno what y'all think of each track..Jus lookin for some constructive criticism cuz theres always room for improvement.

[G-Rated]

Originally Posted by skakembo

Im not really sure what you mean by putting two links for each track:S...but i will put them onto zshare instead.


Done and done...let me kno what y'all think of each track..Jus lookin for some constructive criticism cuz theres always room for improvement.

you have to leave feedback on other people's drop.. dont u think u bein a dick askin folks to check 4 of your tracks & you havent checked ONE drop in the booth or left feedback? the same way u lookin for constructive criticism, they are too...but ima leave this open for a while to give you an opportunity to give feedback on 8 other drops...otherwise itll be closed.

for each track u post = u must give feedback on 2 other drops

but its not smart to post 4 tracks in one thread.. ur not givin ur tracks a chance to be heard kuz ppl aint gon' listen to all 4 at once, maybe skim thru them but not fully listen, dont cut ya self short

n leave feedback...

[maniak]

a.l.p kakembo - what it once was - old skool flow, but nice, good subject, great quality and beat

a.l.p kakembo - stay on our job - again same as above, but what was up with the min and a half of nothing, LoL after like 2:30 mins there was silence

a.l.p ft. kakembo - tellin you - another track about hip hop, alright track and some nice lines

a.l.p kakembo - unstoppable 07 - good metas, like this the best so far, ya went more lyrical on this, and that beat is sick as HELL

simon 2 - nah, didn't like this @ first 2nd dude keep me listening doe

All and all nice, lyrically in some points ya were killing it and in others just norm but still damn good $h!t, unstoppable was the best, didn't like the chorus mix that was the only thing besides that song is a dime

So ya keep doing ya thing but check so other ppl's stuff and leave feed that way ya can get more feed from these ya'll need to check out 8, here's the link to the rule

PLEASE READ!! NEW RULE!! STARTS Dec. 4, 2007!!

[maniak]

Originally Posted by G-Rated

but its not smart to post 4 tracks in one thread.. ur not givin ur tracks a chance to be heard kuz ppl aint gon' listen to all 4 at once, maybe skim thru them but not fully listen, dont cut ya self short

HEY i listened to all the tracks all the way thru @ once! LoL but yeah homie just like G said give some feed and u'll receive, ya got some hot stuff and so do some others on here so listen around and when u leave feed on their stuff just promote urself and let them know u got some tracks up too

[G-Rated]

Originally Posted by maniak

HEY i listened to all the tracks all the way thru @ once! LoL but yeah homie just like G said give some feed and u'll receive, ya got some hot stuff and so do some others on here so listen around and when u leave feed on their stuff just promote urself and let them know u got some tracks up too

yea but everybody aint gon do that.. but i feel like i owe yall that if u followin tha rules & keepin this section movin...

feedback comin in a min...

[G-Rated]

What It Once Was: nice presence, lyrics were nice.. i liked that 'wouldnt get far' metaphor, good shit... old skool sound but fresh...hook was kool.

Stay On Our Job: once again presence was kool.. wasnt as fresh as the other track.. 'record line' & the 'undercover line' was nice.. why didnt you end the track after 2:32?

Tellin You: beat reminded me of spanish guitar by Toni B.. dont know why. anywayz..2nd verse was the best... okay track, nothing special, vocals are a bit low..shoulda filled out the last of the track with something..too much instrumental left IMO.

Unstoppable: hook content could be better... 'leave mark/felt tip' line was dope... flow/delivery was kool... nice track.

Simon 2: 1st verse: flow/delivery didnt suit the beat.. sounds empty ...2nd: better lyrically but flow/delivery didnt quite mesh either...decent track tho...

[brooklyn1]

1st track
i felt the concept of this joint, beat was cool, vocal presence was good, hook needed energy, the lyrics were cool also, flow was on point

2nd track
the flow was definitely on par, i felt it all the way, the hook i didnt really feel as much nah mean, the concept was ok, heard a few ppl do it, lacks creativity

3rd track
i didnt like this beat, the hook was iight could have been a lot better it lacked vocal presence, the rhymes were good

4th track
this was definitely more lyrical, seemed like this is the best track on the list, it was deeper ad the beat was a perfect match... hooks still needs more energy tho

5th track
damn this beat is too simple, the hook has more energy but the song did not fit the beat, you need something more uptempo. the verses were cool but the flow was on point