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virginiaking · 01-22-2008, 08:50 PM

zSHARE - why life happens.mp3

check tha new track leave some thoughts

E & J · 01-23-2008, 02:31 PM

u need to get your stayin on beat game up homie, and the audio sounds like you used the computer's built in mic.

Aril Problym · 02-04-2008, 05:52 PM

yo dun.....dont spit over the beat...just ride the beat...just rock with the beat! You gotta just relax over the beat!!

JDaKidd · 02-04-2008, 07:56 PM

Flow and delivery needs some work, but the lyrics is fresh dude. Keep doing ya thing, you will get better, work on ya flow and you be on ya shit dude

I would say get a better mic, but you not on the level to go to a studio or use the money for nothin, when u get better, then do that, but now, its just a waste of money

Do ya thing

illerrre · 02-05-2008, 01:44 PM

Yeah you should really get a new mic. Then just keep practice flow and delivery. Spit the shit over and over.

**G-Rated** · 02-05-2008, 01:45 PM

whut you recordin wit...??

okay.. your adlibs are way too loud--you need to do a hard pan & lower the volume & keep the words to a minumum, you in tha back carryin on a conversation n shit (thats what it sounds like)--thats way too much, keep dat simple.. the 'backup vocaling' you did does not make up for your lack of delivery & non-existent flow, it sounds too heavy & it needs to be panned like 30 to the left & the volume needs to be lowered as well...everything is too cluttered, sounds like a bunch of noise my dood... the beat is hot tho but your scheme/approach was horrid, it seems like a soliloquy & the beat is simply background music personifyin ya ramblings...

but i give you credit tho.. the layers you did--adlibs/doubling--you def. on the right track but your execution was wrong & i think you have no idea as to what your settings should be but you def. understand how a song is SUPPOSE to sound as far as that goes.. but for now, I'd suggest sticking wit one layer of dry vocals to get comfortable with ridin the beat-scheme appropriate material, delivery & your flow before you start with the more developed techniques... keep workin at it my dood, hit me up if ya have any questions...

EDIT: his mic is the LEAST of the things that are wrong here--

01-22-2008, 08:50 PM	#1 (permalink)
virginiaking Gangster Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 305	Why Life Happens-new track zSHARE - why life happens.mp3 check tha new track leave some thoughts

01-23-2008, 02:31 PM	#2 (permalink)
E & J Criminal Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: MN Posts: 91	u need to get your stayin on beat game up homie, and the audio sounds like you used the computer's built in mic. __________________ :emo001:

02-04-2008, 05:52 PM	#3 (permalink)
Aril Problym Untouchable Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: I'm a Ny dude allday. Bx,Bk,L.I but I reside in the 412 right now!! Posts: 3,621	yo dun.....dont spit over the beat...just ride the beat...just rock with the beat! You gotta just relax over the beat!! __________________ Before you mention me remember: I got unsettled rage,google maps and yellow pages No patience and several cases in several places I break bones like I break promises to do audio I'm sorry yo...no I'm not!!Stop sweating me like cardio-The Problym Mayne

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02-04-2008, 07:56 PM	#4 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,406	Flow and delivery needs some work, but the lyrics is fresh dude. Keep doing ya thing, you will get better, work on ya flow and you be on ya shit dude I would say get a better mic, but you not on the level to go to a studio or use the money for nothin, when u get better, then do that, but now, its just a waste of money Do ya thing

02-05-2008, 01:44 PM	#5 (permalink)
illerrre Rookie Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 48	Yeah you should really get a new mic. Then just keep practice flow and delivery. Spit the shit over and over.

02-05-2008, 01:45 PM	#6 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,734	whut you recordin wit...?? okay.. your adlibs are way too loud--you need to do a hard pan & lower the volume & keep the words to a minumum, you in tha back carryin on a conversation n shit (thats what it sounds like)--thats way too much, keep dat simple.. the 'backup vocaling' you did does not make up for your lack of delivery & non-existent flow, it sounds too heavy & it needs to be panned like 30 to the left & the volume needs to be lowered as well...everything is too cluttered, sounds like a bunch of noise my dood... the beat is hot tho but your scheme/approach was horrid, it seems like a soliloquy & the beat is simply background music personifyin ya ramblings... but i give you credit tho.. the layers you did--adlibs/doubling--you def. on the right track but your execution was wrong & i think you have no idea as to what your settings should be but you def. understand how a song is SUPPOSE to sound as far as that goes.. but for now, I'd suggest sticking wit one layer of dry vocals to get comfortable with ridin the beat-scheme appropriate material, delivery & your flow before you start with the more developed techniques... keep workin at it my dood, hit me up if ya have any questions... EDIT: his mic is the LEAST of the things that are wrong here--