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Old 01-26-2008, 04:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 01-26-2008, 08:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 01-26-2008, 08:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Classik, can you leave feed on two other songs in tha booth too please..

and i'll give feed in a bit
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Old 01-26-2008, 08:55 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Classik, can you leave feed on two other songs in tha booth too please..

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ohh yea ill do that
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Old 01-26-2008, 10:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Good track. First 2 verses were cool, but the third was on point homie. Classik, the hook fits well, but you gotta project more. This is a deep beat so you gotta show that emotion. Overall good shit.
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Old 01-27-2008, 12:30 AM   #6 (permalink)
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overal the song had a nice concept,and meaning..i did sumthing to that beat also,first dude sounded like he was reading off the paper..i think if he was to sound more harder,hungry and rapped the same shit it'll be doper...cool track
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Old 01-27-2008, 07:46 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Basically co-sign these dudes ^^... Classik, you should work on puttin more expression in when ya spittin, if you did that with the chorus, that'd be the shit.. Jda's first verse was good.. second verse had a lil delivery problem at the start and got back on point.. still all good tho..3rd verse was good.. flow was nice...

overall track was nice, was lacking some expression in the main part of the song (the chorus ) but that can be worked on...
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Old 01-27-2008, 09:42 AM   #8 (permalink)
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YG22-The hook is hot as far as the material goes, I like how the subject was approached--just work on your delivery & putting more emotion in it & make sure you ride the beat...Jda, ya verses was kool.. flow seemed a bit inconsistent but content-wise this has potential--some areas could be polished up, rhyme scheme seemed kinda sloppy at the beginning & you was draggin words to stay on beat...prolly should be re-recorded kuz this could be dope... last verse was dope--flow/scheme/delivery everything meshed perfectly, should be like that for your other verses...this joint got MAJOR potential...keep grindin yall
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i think it´s good. have you some songs on soundclick? if yes visit my site and if you want i can put you on it. it´s like free promotion for you.
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Old 01-27-2008, 08:50 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Overall: nice track, sounded very professional

Chorus: Sounded good, but to me the audio sounded a little quiet, maybe if you turned the volume up on that channel it would help. Also you sounded a little careless, maybe try putting more energy in it.

Verse 1 2 and 3: Lyrics were on point, flow was on point. Sounded very professional





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