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Exclusive314 · 02-01-2008, 07:43 PM

Yung Venom - Duffle Bag Full Of Cash.mp3 - 6.11MB

first song posted in 08 leave some feed

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Varcity · 02-01-2008, 07:48 PM

i like that,sounds like sum south lean rock shit....the chorus is catchy,if this was of better quality you'll be gud...yo,lemme get this beat homie.........? or lets do a remix,PM me

EDIT- this is one of the first songs on this site that i actually listened to over and over with the quality being the way it is..i usually hear quality like this and just "X" the page out,but it seems like u made the beat and the quality u didnt let the quality or beat make you..shit gotta rock to it,punchlines was on point for the most part 2

Sunny Black · 02-02-2008, 12:25 PM

this wasnt bad. the quality is compromising though - what you use to record?

Criminal C · 02-03-2008, 06:08 PM

i was feelin' it, tha chorus is ridikulus

Exclusive314 · 02-04-2008, 10:57 PM

uppin 4 mo feed

Novakaine · 02-07-2008, 08:37 PM

flow not my type buh it was good, u sound ah lil like flip, nice track, piece

**G-Rated** · 02-15-2008, 10:50 AM

hook has catchy material but your vocal presence is boring.. it doesnt accent the 'duffle bag full of cash' energy you should bring--needs to be thickened up a bit.. flow was good throughout the entire track but your delivery needs work.. street lyricism was kool.. song has potential to be real dope.. its nice but could be alot better man.

Exclusive314 · 02-15-2008, 01:09 PM

^^^thanx man, it seems thats what everybody says about how he raps since im the "producer" im going to have to stay on his head about his delivery and hopefully it will come out better

**G-Rated** · 02-15-2008, 01:15 PM

^^damn you made that.. beat is dope!!

Exclusive314 · 04-01-2008, 10:02 AM

This The Rapper Yung Venom Thanx imma Take Dat In Consideration i Know That Delevery Is Borin Imma Workin On It Give More Advice

02-01-2008, 07:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
Exclusive314 Thug Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 259	Yung Venom - Duffle Bag Full Of Cash (First Song Of 08') Yung Venom - Duffle Bag Full Of Cash.mp3 - 6.11MB first song posted in 08 leave some feed Left feed on: Boss Remix- Varcity Feat: T-pain & Phenom - On My Way

02-01-2008, 07:48 PM	#2 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,222	i like that,sounds like sum south lean rock shit....the chorus is catchy,if this was of better quality you'll be gud...yo,lemme get this beat homie.........? or lets do a remix,PM me EDIT- this is one of the first songs on this site that i actually listened to over and over with the quality being the way it is..i usually hear quality like this and just "X" the page out,but it seems like u made the beat and the quality u didnt let the quality or beat make you..shit gotta rock to it,punchlines was on point for the most part 2 __________________ A&R's like Ray Charles in Space,they aint SEEING THIS STAR- Varcity Join The Movement Last edited by Varcity; 02-01-2008 at 07:54 PM..

02-02-2008, 12:25 PM	#3 (permalink)
Sunny Black Hitman Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 410	this wasnt bad. the quality is compromising though - what you use to record? __________________ Sunny Black. 2008. www.soundclick.com/sunnyblackproductions www.myspace.com/sunnyblackproductions

02-07-2008, 08:37 PM	#6 (permalink)
Novakaine Thug Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 224	flow not my type buh it was good, u sound ah lil like flip, nice track, piece __________________ DR DRE BEAT YouTube - The Mechanics of War (dr dre westside type beat) fl studio 7 NIGGAZ CALL ME MANNIE FRESH OF DIZ BEAT SHIT myspace.com/triniboiz

04-01-2008, 10:02 AM	#10 (permalink)
Exclusive314 Thug Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 259	This The Rapper Yung Venom Thanx imma Take Dat In Consideration i Know That Delevery Is Borin Imma Workin On It Give More Advice __________________ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EqUot7VE7oA

02-03-2008, 06:08 PM	#4 (permalink)
Criminal C Gangster Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 372	i was feelin' it, tha chorus is ridikulus

02-04-2008, 10:57 PM	#5 (permalink)
Exclusive314 Thug Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 259	uppin 4 mo feed

02-15-2008, 10:50 AM	#7 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,721	hook has catchy material but your vocal presence is boring.. it doesnt accent the 'duffle bag full of cash' energy you should bring--needs to be thickened up a bit.. flow was good throughout the entire track but your delivery needs work.. street lyricism was kool.. song has potential to be real dope.. its nice but could be alot better man.

02-15-2008, 01:09 PM	#8 (permalink)
Exclusive314 Thug Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 259	^^^thanx man, it seems thats what everybody says about how he raps since im the "producer" im going to have to stay on his head about his delivery and hopefully it will come out better

02-15-2008, 01:15 PM	#9 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,721	^^damn you made that.. beat is dope!!

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