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02-11-2008, 11:16 AM
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Empty apologies
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The Author ft. Maniak - Get Back New Track Im Me Empty apologies: SoundClick artist: illerill - page with MP3 music downloads |
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02-12-2008, 03:56 PM
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That bad, eh? It's a rough draft but feedback could still be good hehe.
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02-12-2008, 03:59 PM
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I liked it. I listened to it yesterday and forgot to leave feed. I can't listen to a lot of rappers that have an accent like that but your an exception. Everything sounded cool except the chorus when you said empty apologies sounded kinda funny. But keep doin what your doin and invest in a better mic and you'll be set.
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02-12-2008, 04:22 PM
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hehe, thanks. Only reason this is a rough draft is cuz I'm ashamed to spit when my parents are home. So my reccording days and reccording time are very limited... Gotta figure this out someday... They think I'm using the mic to chat with others... oh snap haha.
Hopefully gonna buy new mic tomorrow + just found out I'm standing way too close to the mic when I'm spittin'! Gonna rerecord on monday and tuseday. Hope to come with an improved sound then! As far as it goes with my english I can do nothing but keep practicing pronunciations 'n' shit hehe. Thx for feed. Keeping me alive. Last edited by illerrre; 02-12-2008 at 04:26 PM.. |
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02-12-2008, 04:40 PM
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more like what path said..the accent kinda throws me off but i actually listened to this..i liked the message it potrayed and the beat fit the concept well..it was gud also..overal cool drop..the effects on ya voice was kinda aggy tho cuz i was tryna understand wa u was sayin
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02-12-2008, 04:50 PM
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YEah what these two said
but also i actually listened closely to what you was sayin and its some real talk man. I liked you speach at the end. I have the same problems with people labeling me a criminal for the same reasons. Also i like how that speach went into the chorus again that sounded cool. Keep it up!
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02-12-2008, 04:53 PM
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Yea I suck at mixing too hehe. Anyway thanks appreciate it. I'll try to come back with better sound next week.
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02-12-2008, 05:52 PM
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I listened to "empty apologies"
I think you can ride the beat better. Dont fight the beat my man.. Let it flow.. Flow was slightly choppy. Lyrics were good from what I could understand.. I think less effects would be good. Other than that.. Keep on truckin sir. -NiqNaq, the Item
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