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MikeGame · 02-18-2008, 03:47 PM

Yo peep this new track from my mixtape "Mike Game as Vinny Chase in The Amazing Rapper Smacker".

Its to the Lupe Fiasco "Coolest" beat. Fuckin love it, and believe I did work on it.
Let me know:
coolest mike.mp3 - 2.31MB

links:
JDaKidd - Roses [Produced by G-Major]
The Author ft. Maniak - Get Back

MikeGame · 02-19-2008, 02:22 AM

Yo Im uppin, cant get no feedback or anything????

Grimy · 02-19-2008, 09:24 AM

Was cool. I was feelin the lyrics. Delievery was pretty good actually. Everything else was ight.

illerrre · 02-20-2008, 12:51 PM

this was alright, I think you should lower the beat a bit though.

JDaKidd · 02-20-2008, 02:34 PM

Flow can use a brush up, devilery is ok. Lyrics was cool too. The track is pretty nice homie. Work on some of the small stuff more

**G-Rated** · 02-25-2008, 11:37 AM

flow was bad, your rhyme structure didnt fit the tempo of tha beat, alot of your bars seemed unorganized & they didnt keep a steady pattern with tha downbeat... delivery wasnt great either kuz your voice doesnt complement the beat.. not alot of people have the versatility to rap over any beat.. just because you like a beat or song doesnt mean you'll be able to flow over it no matter how good your songs have been in this past... this beat wasnt your forte.. it made you come across very amateurish & new..

keep grindin tho...

IgotAlongLeg · 04-09-2008, 01:42 AM

whoa that must've been a freestyle

SM Productions · 04-10-2008, 01:33 AM

listening. okay. this is cool. nice flow. first rapper is def cool. had me noddin.

MikeGame · 04-10-2008, 10:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SM Productions

listening. okay. this is cool. nice flow. first rapper is def cool. had me noddin.

LOL, its only one rapper on this one... ME.!!! Thanks for the feedback though, i didnt do as well on this track as I usually do, all mcs take l's at times.

02-18-2008, 03:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
MikeGame Gangster Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 351	The Coolest Mike (just finished) Yo peep this new track from my mixtape "Mike Game as Vinny Chase in The Amazing Rapper Smacker". Its to the Lupe Fiasco "Coolest" beat. Fuckin love it, and believe I did work on it. Let me know: coolest mike.mp3 - 2.31MB links: JDaKidd - Roses [Produced by G-Major] The Author ft. Maniak - Get Back __________________ Mike Game + JDaKidd = The Reason You Rap

02-19-2008, 02:22 AM	#2 (permalink)
MikeGame Gangster Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 351	Yo Im uppin, cant get no feedback or anything???? __________________ Mike Game + JDaKidd = The Reason You Rap

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04-10-2008, 01:33 AM	#8 (permalink)
SM Productions Rookie Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 28	listening. okay. this is cool. nice flow. first rapper is def cool. had me noddin. __________________ Add Me on MySpace! www.myspace.com/sleepermusicproductions Enter Code JU22823 At Checkout And Save 20% On Karmaloop Gear

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02-20-2008, 12:51 PM	#4 (permalink)
illerrre Rookie Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 48	this was alright, I think you should lower the beat a bit though.

02-20-2008, 02:34 PM	#5 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,404	Flow can use a brush up, devilery is ok. Lyrics was cool too. The track is pretty nice homie. Work on some of the small stuff more

02-25-2008, 11:37 AM	#6 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,721	flow was bad, your rhyme structure didnt fit the tempo of tha beat, alot of your bars seemed unorganized & they didnt keep a steady pattern with tha downbeat... delivery wasnt great either kuz your voice doesnt complement the beat.. not alot of people have the versatility to rap over any beat.. just because you like a beat or song doesnt mean you'll be able to flow over it no matter how good your songs have been in this past... this beat wasnt your forte.. it made you come across very amateurish & new.. keep grindin tho...