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Old 02-20-2008, 12:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hard times & empty apologies

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Old 02-20-2008, 12:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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the new track is pretty dope. the beat is sick, and you actually flow pretty well over it.


What beat is it?

And can you PM it to me haha?
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Old 02-27-2008, 11:11 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Come on, please! I need the feed...

Here's the beat: http://rapidshare.com/files/95375784...nload.mp3.html
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Old 02-27-2008, 11:37 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hard Times: Hook has a distorted presence to it--did you do that on purpose? it actually sounds dope to me though.. if i was you i'd get a harmonizing plugin it'll really help to level out your soundwaves & restructure your harmonies so they mesh with the beat better and give your pitch more precision... lyrics were kool, delivery was nice.. mixing could be a bit better but nonetheless dope track.

Empty Apologies: Hook could be better..lyrics were good, flow was okay--timing could've been better on some parts though, delivery was pretty good.. all in all, i wasnt feeling this one as much as 'hard times' but it was still a kool track.
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Old 02-27-2008, 11:56 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Aight thanks!!

Problem with hook on hard times is, I can't sing...

Empty apologies: Dunno what to do with hook I don't like it either. Dunno if I should just put the track in the trash or keep working on it...
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Aight thanks!!

Problem with hook on hard times is, I can't sing...

Empty apologies: Dunno what to do with hook I don't like it either. Dunno if I should just put the track in the trash or keep working on it...
which is why i suggested a harmonizing plugin.. they do wonders ill see if i can find some free ones, i highly doubt it though kuz them shits are costly but worth it IMO.. if your wanting to add harmony to your hooks & your not that good of a singer..

& no auto tune does not apply to the type of plugin im talkin about...
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I know it doesn't cuz i tried auto tune, haha I could pay for one too I guess..

Do you apply it after you've recorded or is it like it is with auto tune?
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u cant sing

nice.. just work on da delivery & quality
& get a swag
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u cant sing

nice.. just work on da delivery & quality
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Ye I know I can't sing lol.

U think a harmonizing plugin would work, or should I try to get someone else to do the hook?

Appreciate the feedback man
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Beat and rap is tight; yeah the singing part is fucked up
choose a singer I think you can even find them up here willing to do it!
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