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Underboss
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: where dem byrds be
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Not my type of track but got to get the game from every angle so here it is
Shorty she get low - http://www.zshare.net/audio/8779253d18e753/ Beat by Epik the Dawn, one of the greatest beat meakers round and Prince Charles on the Chorus, boy got talent, bout to lease this beat and try to get some radio play or something wit it and of coarse it'll get rerecorded in a better studio then what i got, ya tell me what ya think Props for feed JDaKidd - Day No *NEW* Freestyle almost forgot bout my 2 feed backs Last edited by maniak; 03-12-2008 at 12:36 PM.. |
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Lizzondon
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Smooth track, yeah it sounds like somethin i'd hear on radio fam (in a good way)
good luck!!
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Rookie
Join Date: Apr 2007
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Ye chorus was dope... You spittin' it straight too... Delivery could be better.
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its prolly zshare but i cant get it to play or download
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Underboss
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: where dem byrds be
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added a new link fo ya
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Thug
Join Date: Apr 2007
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yeh it ain my type buh u rapped it out nice, hook is nice 2, singer killd it. i like dat casual line in da 1st verse, was nice, yur flow an delivery fits diz beat
8/10 quality is good 2
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beat is dope.. hook is nice..you delivered this shit rite, fits the beat... got a nice, laid back, chill vibe to it.. lyrics were on point, basically a flawless flow throughout the entire track.. real kool joint...
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Gangster
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Miami "Where The Goons Lerk & The Fuck Niggaz Die"
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The hook rydin the verses need 2 be tighten up a lil more after u do that u got a hit on your hands keep doin u....
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Underboss
Join Date: Mar 2007
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real talk homie, like I said this is one I have to put some studio time into and try to get out there, Like I told my home boys "I know it ain't my type of joint but this is the gateway to get ppl to listen to some of my other tracks" real talk it is what it is, this type of track is what got the game going right now and if I can create a different fan base off this and they listen to some of my other tracks (lord listen, falling tears, Crazy life) then maybe I can get a lil' more known, even here sometimes ppl sleep on my tracks but it's cool, it is what it is
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