new track..."in Your dreams"

[G_J]

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[Pathogenik]

not to be an asshole but u need a lot of work. for one ur vocals are way too low and your offbeat throughout the whole song.


also if ur gonna drop leave feedback links.

[G_J]

aight


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[J0JO]

dont quit your day job.... honestly man

[Varcity]

vocals are way to low...the beat sounds okay,it was gud but i didnt hear you,plsu you was off beat...sounds like i recorded it and tried to match it to a beat,keep it up tho,jus work on ya recording skills,you gone elevate soon or lata

[G-Rated]

ima keep this open kuz i know you leave feedback in tha production lab.. but just make sure you post 2 links you've left feedback on next time...


as far as tha track, uhh idk what it is you doin but you def aint record this live if you did, you must be deaf... but like Varc said, it sounds like you recorded this & mixed it with tha beat.. shit was horrible bro... keep at it


but fa real tho, what did u do?

[G_J]

lol nothing i recorded live, normal idk...i can hear it fine on my computer so i have no idea what da problem could me man...i wish i would know what ya talking about maybe dats da reason ya say its horrible lol but naw i know i need work with my flow i see but atleast my lyrics be good ahahaha

thanks for da feed back and yea G i just didt know my b i'll do dat next time for sure

[G-Rated]

yea nothin towards ya lyrics.. but you gotta study tha craft of beat patterns & how to flow.. ya flow needs alot of work, it'll get better with time but YOU have to recognize what it is your doin wrong before you can correct it..now im not tryna be funny but can you hear how off beat you are, can you hear how ya vocals are all over the place & not stable with the beat?

but you gotta learn how to hit tha downbeat, how to flow with a broken pattern, listen to each measure & structure ya lyrics to it.. there's certain beats that are made to anticipate & others that aint, theres beats where a fast cadence is necessary n sum that aint.. sometimes ya syllables can extend over a certain measure... i mean there's several avenues you can take to find ya flow & which one you good at.... once you find one ya good at then change it up a bit & become versatile... BUT FIRST YOU HAVE TO FIND ONE...

[G_J]

yea i see what you saying...making beats has helped a bit understanding but i'll do better with da next 1..this is only da start of my first cd im doing with like 15-17 tracks so hopefully by da 2nd i'll be good to go

cant prop gotta spread..i got you tho

[Manifess]

ok for starters.....the beat is horrible....sounds like it was mad on fruity loops -8.5
Ya sound quality is horrid....sounds like ur rapping through a can.....
....i'm sorry if u dun like what i'm sayin but i can only be honest cause thas tha only way u gonna get better

ya flow is terrible....ur off beat....sounds like ur reading off a piece of paper and not even listening to the beat......
ya lyrics....well that goes wit ya quality....wit bad quality its kinda hard to rate what the hell u say if i can't understand u......

man jus keep it up and practice practice practice.....u'll eventually elevate....and get to where u wanna be....

track overall.....2/10 for effort.....