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Melee412 · 06-03-2008, 07:06 PM

Unsigned, but we go harder than alotta industry katz. Peep this joint. FIRE!!!

Melee- Put Yo Hands Up (ft. Charmsidi)
www.soundclick.com/melee
http://www.zshare.net/audio/13066341170dabf2/

Beat by: CHEMIST

Show these katz support 2...
www.soundclick.com/charmsidi
www.soundclick.com/chemist06

Feedback Please!!! I'll return the favor.

Varcity · 06-04-2008, 10:52 AM

i was feeling the chorus more than anything...

far as that,the PUT...YOUR....HANDS....UP part that was in the background,it shulda served as a ad-lib,it kinda over-road the main voice..still can get away wit it tho,but future reference..

when it came to the verse,wasnt kinda feeling it...i mean the metas was there but the flow kinda got boring..wasnt interested after a couple bars,song wise tho i guess u can get away wit it

Melee412 · 06-04-2008, 04:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Varcity

i was feeling the chorus more than anything...

far as that,the PUT...YOUR....HANDS....UP part that was in the background,it shulda served as a ad-lib,it kinda over-road the main voice..still can get away wit it tho,but future reference..

when it came to the verse,wasnt kinda feeling it...i mean the metas was there but the flow kinda got boring..wasnt interested after a couple bars,song wise tho i guess u can get away wit it

I feel u thats real shit, and constructive too. I was kinda questionin my flow on this one too. The choppy delivery at times soundied right, but sorta bored me too.

*nathan*d · 06-04-2008, 08:37 PM

ahooo dayym mayyn dat guyz got skillz on put yo hands up!!

Tyme Lyne · 06-05-2008, 04:21 PM

beat ill ..lyrics draggin ...i aint feeling it ...nice introduction though ...

06-03-2008, 07:06 PM	#1 (permalink)
Melee412 Criminal Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 80	2 Of The Hottest Out TBA!!! Unsigned, but we go harder than alotta industry katz. Peep this joint. FIRE!!! Melee- Put Yo Hands Up (ft. Charmsidi) www.soundclick.com/melee http://www.zshare.net/audio/13066341170dabf2/ Beat by: CHEMIST Show these katz support 2... www.soundclick.com/charmsidi www.soundclick.com/chemist06 Feedback Please!!! I'll return the favor.

06-04-2008, 10:52 AM	#2 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 6,876	i was feeling the chorus more than anything... far as that,the PUT...YOUR....HANDS....UP part that was in the background,it shulda served as a ad-lib,it kinda over-road the main voice..still can get away wit it tho,but future reference.. when it came to the verse,wasnt kinda feeling it...i mean the metas was there but the flow kinda got boring..wasnt interested after a couple bars,song wise tho i guess u can get away wit it __________________ VARCITY WILL BE PERFORMING ON OCT. 30th @ CLUB MINK Join The Movement

06-04-2008, 08:37 PM	#4 (permalink)
nathand Underboss Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 1,836	ahooo dayym mayyn dat guyz got skillz on put yo hands up!! __________________

06-05-2008, 04:21 PM	#5 (permalink)
Tyme Lyne Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Still in VA ...Stressed out like a Mutha FUcka ! Posts: 4,683	beat ill ..lyrics draggin ...i aint feeling it ...nice introduction though ... __________________ Some Things Change..... www.ripthemic.org

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