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youngdvs · 06-12-2008, 03:10 AM

getting use to a new flow , new delivery , new typpa rhyme scheme to what i use to do but these two new tracks i been meaning to post up ... both is 1 verse tracks with 1 hook but please drop construtive crit much apprecited if ya do and ill give props n feedback on your tracks iif i havent allready

http://www.zshare.net/audio/13495212efba74c6/

^^^^^
so far track - bout how far ive came with music

http://www.zshare.net/audio/134955103e94114f/
^^^^
ride out - track about 2 faced people in tha world

**G-Rated** · 06-12-2008, 08:36 PM

1st joint.. kinda had an irregular scheme, i thought it was koo.. nice delivery
2nd joint.. wasnt feelin tha hook... flow wasnt smooth on this joint, delivery was okay but the quality was horrible, vocals kept goin in & out...

why these 2 joints unfinished? i think you should finish the 1st one up tho, it sounds pretty hot to me...

youngdvs · 06-13-2008, 02:13 AM

yo thanx fa the feedback it means alots yo....

Pathogenik · 06-13-2008, 04:34 PM

1st one was dope. you should definitely finish that shit.

And I agree wit G on the second one. Keep it up tho.

**gorgon2020** · 06-15-2008, 09:54 AM

i liked the first one which you should definitely finish it it had a good flow and a good beat.

youngdvs · 06-15-2008, 04:18 PM

Thanx fa the feed everybody props gittin ya way !! n that so far track should be done soon !!

06-12-2008, 03:10 AM	#1 (permalink)
youngdvs Thug Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 256	2 New Tracks + Brand New Flow getting use to a new flow , new delivery , new typpa rhyme scheme to what i use to do but these two new tracks i been meaning to post up ... both is 1 verse tracks with 1 hook but please drop construtive crit much apprecited if ya do and ill give props n feedback on your tracks iif i havent allready http://www.zshare.net/audio/13495212efba74c6/ ^^^^^ so far track - bout how far ive came with music http://www.zshare.net/audio/134955103e94114f/ ^^^^ ride out - track about 2 faced people in tha world __________________ Protect Ya Neck, my sword still remain imperial Before I blast the mic, RZA scratch off the serial ~~~> WWW.MYSPACE.COM/OSIDESEVENSIXOH

06-13-2008, 02:13 AM	#3 (permalink)
youngdvs Thug Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 256	yo thanx fa the feedback it means alots yo.... __________________ Protect Ya Neck, my sword still remain imperial Before I blast the mic, RZA scratch off the serial ~~~> WWW.MYSPACE.COM/OSIDESEVENSIXOH

06-13-2008, 04:34 PM	#4 (permalink)
Pathogenik Rap GodFather Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Ohio Posts: 5,165	1st one was dope. you should definitely finish that shit. And I agree wit G on the second one. Keep it up tho. __________________ "The only good is knowledge and the only evil is ignorance." - Socrates

06-15-2008, 04:18 PM	#6 (permalink)
youngdvs Thug Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 256	Thanx fa the feed everybody props gittin ya way !! n that so far track should be done soon !! __________________ Protect Ya Neck, my sword still remain imperial Before I blast the mic, RZA scratch off the serial ~~~> WWW.MYSPACE.COM/OSIDESEVENSIXOH

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06-12-2008, 08:36 PM	#2 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,501	1st joint.. kinda had an irregular scheme, i thought it was koo.. nice delivery 2nd joint.. wasnt feelin tha hook... flow wasnt smooth on this joint, delivery was okay but the quality was horrible, vocals kept goin in & out... why these 2 joints unfinished? i think you should finish the 1st one up tho, it sounds pretty hot to me...

06-15-2008, 09:54 AM	#5 (permalink)
gorgon2020 Outlaw Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: eau claire wisconsin Posts: 118	i liked the first one which you should definitely finish it it had a good flow and a good beat.