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Conartist
Join Date: Dec 2005
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lAko-H6d_k8
If wanted for D/L or anything http://www.zshare.net/audio/13536685fb47c538/ Mantis - Cold Damn World Changin For The Worst feat. Mantis |
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Whas good wit it...
ight peepin ya joint.....ya punchlines are deffinitly on point....ya flow is a lil shaky...sounds kinda like ur readin....and with that being said...it goes to ya mic presence....u need to memorize ya lyrics b4 u spit em....and it will sound more natural...and give u a better presence and flow.....and ya sound quality is decent....this wasn't bad at all...jus a few things to tighten up.....no hate jus constructive crit... keep doin ya thang and b ez
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Conartist
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Capo
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Pretty cool. I would've set the vocals a tad lower, not much, but that might be.
Some cool punches, keep going strong.
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Don
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i might have to do this beat to out do you a be a dick :P
nah just fuckin wit you.. good shit
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Outlaw
Join Date: Apr 2007
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delivery is gettin better dan yo previous, multis d usual, u always hav punchlines like dat open shells an arms out lines was dope, jus my opinion buh dem lines wit shots an yearbooks an lines bout crack an shit i wud neva use dem shits becuz iz too overplayed an i ratha hav a filler dan a overplayed punch buh daz jus my opinion. try switchin up yo flow sumtimes dough. overall i fuck wit it
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