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Its official...I had to do it....I had to.....
This is sooo serious....if you dun peep this then i dunno whas wrong wit u.... This is that REAL Manifess type shit.... http://www.soundclick.com/theofficialmanifess I replied to They Know IT's GUNNA MUSIC BABY----
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more importanly I have paper to chase I need to change my shoes....... Last edited by Manifess; 06-23-2008 at 06:32 PM. |
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I swear yall niggaz be sleepin
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in all honesty, aint all that bad, put together nice, decent quality, nice flow... props...
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If you tone down the echo and add more reverb this shit would be nice. And it sounds like you are a 4th of a second off of the beat. But the content and delivery was nice, and it's somewhat original, a side from trying to flow like Cory Gunz, but this shit is nice.
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Truthfully, I think you shouldn't have done this beat, it seems like u bout 3 seconds ahead of what u should be. But if not for that, the flow would be nice. Lyrics was on point, I really didnt like some of the stops. I think its ill tho. Only thing I didnt like was the 3 second thing and some stops, other than that, its dope, do ya thing
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Yo' peep the scenario nigga'... do you even know how many niggas did A Millie remix? If you want to classify yourself as a ho' nigga that's fine with me... I already explained my feelings about your version in this thread. So unless I stated it, don't assume I was talking about you "ho nigga."
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you deserve to die with a dick in ya mouth.....fake ass Steve Erkle thug....this net shit....u a lucky ass nigga....if u presented ya self like this in person especially to a ni66a like me...u would get murked....and thas on GD homie...
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more importanly I have paper to chase I need to change my shoes....... Last edited by Manifess; 06-24-2008 at 08:23 PM. |
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yea 6itch u on da hush now huh.......fake 6itch ass ni66a.....i swear u lucky this is net shit homie......talkin shit on tha net like u 6e doin jus proves u a fake ass ni66a lookin 4 attention cause u can't get it in ya "hood" that u claim u live in.....or at home I assume....what are you like 16 years old or having an identity crisis with a self esteem issue or sumthin? whas goin on?
posin ass ni66a.....damn u need to 6e 6anned fa real....and not from da site....from life.....
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as far as tha content goes.. this shit is koo but your off beat almost tha entire track.. (which has been tha case for alot of doods who done hopped on this beat) sounds like youre over thinking.. work on enunciation as well when you spit fast... its not about tha ability to spit fast.. its bein able to make tha syllables crisp n clear when doin so... shit should be smooth as butter n ya syllabic cadence should be on a roll like rick ross clothin ya diig... pretty koo joint tho.. just work on them thangs a bit
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manifess dont worry about that DAT 70's Show fanatic .. anyways i like the shyt . you picked that mutha fucka up real talk when the sequence was dropped . and started tearing the track up ..real talk.
BUT YO ON THE REAL....IM tired of peeps dropping tracks on that Im Millie Shyt its getting old !!! ... No diss my dude ...you know how it go ...lol peace and love fam .
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