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gorgon2020 · 06-27-2008, 12:13 PM

okay now heres some fresh music the group is called jitts and they only have two songs just check them out and tell me what you think. because they are just starting out and they appreciate the feedback also they are working on more songs
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm...ndid=386355316

"Call Me On My Sidekick"- VARCITY (PRODUCED BY:TVBEATS)
B.A.R.D. - Playas Get Chosen

Vinyl · 06-28-2008, 10:14 AM

your delivery needs a little work, you sound a bit bored on the mix. Good work otherwise.

**G-Rated** · 06-28-2008, 10:15 AM

for some reasoh i think you apart of tha group..

if they doin this for fun, i'd say continue to do it for fun.. if they lookin to get signed.. they def will have to work on writing & coming up with concepts better than 'fuck bitches' kuz they look about 15 or 16 yo, shit maybe even younger than that.. but i cant really judge tha flow & delivery kuz on 'fuck bitches' thats about as typical of a flow/delivery you're going get with tha topic they chose to spit on & tha mediocre rhyme scheme they had...

gorgon2020 · 07-08-2008, 01:01 AM

now there are two new songs that they put up so check them out

**G-Rated** · 07-11-2008, 08:31 AM

new joints are alot better than fuck bitches... they needa work on they hooks

gorgon2020 · 07-12-2008, 11:47 PM

well they are good but not yet they will learn as time goes on. they finally have their own beats so i think that will help them out. thats what helps people is criticism because if you hate what they do it means they will get better. only time will tell.

06-27-2008, 12:13 PM	#1 (permalink)
gorgon2020 Outlaw Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: eau claire wisconsin Posts: 115	jitts okay now heres some fresh music the group is called jitts and they only have two songs just check them out and tell me what you think. because they are just starting out and they appreciate the feedback also they are working on more songs http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm...ndid=386355316 "Call Me On My Sidekick"- VARCITY (PRODUCED BY:TVBEATS) B.A.R.D. - Playas Get Chosen __________________ Last edited by gorgon2020; 06-28-2008 at 09:50 AM.

06-28-2008, 10:14 AM	#2 (permalink)
Vinyl Thug Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 207	your delivery needs a little work, you sound a bit bored on the mix. Good work otherwise. __________________ http://www.thelyricles.wordpress.com/ Check out my album

07-08-2008, 01:01 AM	#4 (permalink)
gorgon2020 Outlaw Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: eau claire wisconsin Posts: 115	now there are two new songs that they put up so check them out __________________

07-12-2008, 11:47 PM	#6 (permalink)
gorgon2020 Outlaw Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: eau claire wisconsin Posts: 115	well they are good but not yet they will learn as time goes on. they finally have their own beats so i think that will help them out. thats what helps people is criticism because if you hate what they do it means they will get better. only time will tell. __________________

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06-28-2008, 10:15 AM	#3 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,290	for some reasoh i think you apart of tha group.. if they doin this for fun, i'd say continue to do it for fun.. if they lookin to get signed.. they def will have to work on writing & coming up with concepts better than 'fuck bitches' kuz they look about 15 or 16 yo, shit maybe even younger than that.. but i cant really judge tha flow & delivery kuz on 'fuck bitches' thats about as typical of a flow/delivery you're going get with tha topic they chose to spit on & tha mediocre rhyme scheme they had...

07-11-2008, 08:31 AM	#5 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,290	new joints are alot better than fuck bitches... they needa work on they hooks