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06-28-2008, 09:53 AM
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Thug
Join Date: Aug 2006
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Vinyl spits over Timbo, Biggie, and Jay tracks (Different shit, check it out)
Wat up gang, check out some of my stuff recorded when I was blaazed outta my mind (So if anything else, listen to see if you can rank my highness), feedback'll get props
http://www.zshare.net/audio/14349110f07854cc/ I need a resolution Verse http://www.zshare.net/audio/14349268efbdcebe/ Big Poppa Verse http://www.zshare.net/audio/14349352f1c97ca2/ Feelin it verse
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06-28-2008, 11:06 AM
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RGFMod
 
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★
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Resolution: tha entire track was panned to tha left.. dont know what happened there.. but work on breath control.. flow was a bit choppy, delivery could be better, it didnt sound natural to me, you gotta find ya own voice & swag & use it...
BP verse: same shit with tha panned shit, you should look into what it is youre doing... lacks any type of emotion, sounds like your reading from tha paper.. flow is dry & delivery once again sounds unnatural.. work on vocal presence & writing to tha beat, your lyrics werent structured to tha beat at all on this joint... Feelin it: panned to tha left  started off good, then like clockwork you got gimmicky with that 'retarded' rapper style, enunciation shit doods is adaptin now... shit doesnt suit your vocals maan, once again find your OWN presence & use it... keep writin, spittin & workin on findin Vinyl.. dont follow suit with what you've seen/heard tha next man do, do something different, be creative & leave ya own mark... you gotta feel this shit homie... spit with passion... keep postin lookin forward to seein ya progress |
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06-28-2008, 02:47 PM
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Thug
Join Date: Aug 2006
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Yeah for whatever reason my mic pans everything to the left, I need to figure that bad boy out. Anyway propz is what I promised and propz is what u shall get sir. Thanks for the feedback.
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07-04-2008, 07:16 PM
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Criminal
Join Date: Nov 2006
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Yo I know these are just like free verses or whatever but if you gonna post them, I suggest looking into some better sound quality bro. I mean I'm a fan of music and I liked your flow and shit on the tracks but the quality makes it almost unbearable, as it will for most listeners. Delivery could use more energy as well and lyrics are straight. I mean if you really want to get some clear feedback just work on fixing up your quality and put time into editing. Just my opinion but you looking for real feedback I'm sure or else you wouldn't post shit here. So there it is, keepin' it 100 feel me?
Check out my new joint btw....return the love |
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