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Criminal
Join Date: Feb 2007
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It has another artists name (mentioned at the start) I was going to collab with him but he cannot record atm. But I'll cut that out. So have a listen:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/14484358a64335b5/ So if you are interested in this, PM me and link me to some of your music.
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Criminal
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 78
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I like your voice but the flow sounds odd on this, it's not going on it smooth. It sounds like you wrote this to a different beat and had to restructure it to spit it on this beat. Delivery is aight, could use more energy in my opinion cause you got the voice and potential to really hit them in the head with shit. Lyrics were straight, few decent lines in there, I like that "grind" line. Chorus, I think might have work but it's not really sticking with the melody feel me. Just giving real constructive criticism, so hopefully you appreciate it.
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Criminal
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 78
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Return the favor...
2 new tracks - ft. Grime & Termanology!!!! |
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