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John.F.Remedy · 07-15-2008, 04:35 AM

Older song I did. True to life. Opinions welcomed.

Mistah Vocab A.K.A. Tha Skitzo Flow

gangstafied.mp3 - 8.97MB

John.F.Remedy · 07-16-2008, 03:50 AM

bump...

**G-Rated** · 07-16-2008, 10:13 AM

delivery didnt move me much & with tha content you shoulda showed more presence.... flow didnt sound too crisp either... rhyme scheme was basic.. a pretty much generic joint... keep at it tho...

John.F.Remedy · 07-16-2008, 09:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by G-Rated

delivery didnt move me much & with tha content you shoulda showed more presence.... flow didnt sound too crisp either... rhyme scheme was basic.. a pretty much generic joint... keep at it tho...

Appreciate tha feedback homie. Good looks. I take crit any way I can get ya dig?

07-15-2008, 04:35 AM	#1 (permalink)
John.F.Remedy Rap GodFather Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: From the 310 to 520 and bacc again. Posts: 5,427	Gangstafied Older song I did. True to life. Opinions welcomed. Mistah Vocab A.K.A. Tha Skitzo Flow gangstafied.mp3 - 8.97MB __________________ "When I'm shootin up ya magnum it's hard to get outta dodge" - Crooked I

07-16-2008, 03:50 AM	#2 (permalink)
John.F.Remedy Rap GodFather Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: From the 310 to 520 and bacc again. Posts: 5,427	bump... __________________ "When I'm shootin up ya magnum it's hard to get outta dodge" - Crooked I

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07-16-2008, 10:13 AM	#3 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,501	delivery didnt move me much & with tha content you shoulda showed more presence.... flow didnt sound too crisp either... rhyme scheme was basic.. a pretty much generic joint... keep at it tho...