$-centz - Let Um Know [[FEEDBACK PLEASE]]

[$-centz]

My Boi NeBillz on this track I'm on the 3rd verse and the chorus so let me know whut your overall feeling bout this track is respectt

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1538555217f411c0/

Tracks I commented on...

fuxxin with autotune

JDaKidd - I Get High [Requested]

[G-Rated]

hook could use a better delivery & some effects to make it stand out... 1st verse had no emotion at all, reading was too obvious... flow was off, as far as content goes--dood is going in the right direction but he needs to work on executing a better scheme.. 2nd verse, same thing.. no emotion, no presence at all... syllable count is off... 3rd verse, better delivery than the other verses but emotion is still non existent... needs a better scheme... content could be a bit more creative...

overall, the lack of emotions made this sound boring & not believable... could be a decent track... keep at it

[$-centz]

Thanks for the feed g

[maniak]

co-sign with G-R lack of emotions on the first 2 verses really dragged the song, your part was decent but you could use some more multis or something you know to give it a lil more bounce you know, beat was nice, song was alright

[$-centz]

thanks guys, alot of my boiz said the same thing... the first two verses brought the song down... lol i ai'nt gonna feature that dude no more