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J-Mill · 11-26-2006, 09:59 PM

Aiyyo im new to tha site

just 2 let yall no im alot mo lyrical then dis, but i waz on my club shit n here it is

hi-Fi:http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=4663416&q=hi

lo-fi:http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=4663416&q=lo

yep its on the Jim Jones we fly high beat

im currently working on a lyrically deep song ill post once its finished

leave feed plz

Prycele$$ · 11-26-2006, 10:54 PM

Ok im listening, and maybe its me, but you gotta ride the beat, gotta sound hungry man...
The chorus was hot, cept hustlin got played out (take after the song and only say it after every other part)
Yah seemed off beat, well not off peace, just the way you was saying it sounded like you didnt rhyme...

J-Mill · 11-26-2006, 10:58 PM

gotcha thanx i appreciate tha feed!

J-Mill · 11-27-2006, 07:20 PM

uppin

DarkRyda · 11-29-2006, 01:26 AM

man i have a question for ya nice beat though question is have u eva tried rappin someone elses Lyrics? says 2pac, jay-z,dr dre, the game? maybe try one i wanna hear ya with someone elses lyrics

J-Mill · 11-29-2006, 07:26 PM

^hell na r u fuckin serious!!!!

i will neva get into dat fake ghostwriting shit!

Don't ever even suggest that shit!

The only lyrics im gonna rap are the ones that ive written!!

I dont even no u n im ashmeded of u, wow u dont no how bad ghostwriten pisses me off!

11-26-2006, 09:59 PM	#1 (permalink)
J-Mill Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Da Ville, KY/ C-Town, IN Posts: 117	J-Mill - Hustlin'!!! (Audio Song) Aiyyo im new to tha site just 2 let yall no im alot mo lyrical then dis, but i waz on my club shit n here it is hi-Fi:http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=4663416&q=hi lo-fi:http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=4663416&q=lo yep its on the Jim Jones we fly high beat im currently working on a lyrically deep song ill post once its finished leave feed plz

11-26-2006, 10:54 PM	#2 (permalink)
Prycele$$ Don Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Elkhart, dat C.O.E niggas... Posts: 2,746	Ok im listening, and maybe its me, but you gotta ride the beat, gotta sound hungry man... The chorus was hot, cept hustlin got played out (take after the song and only say it after every other part) Yah seemed off beat, well not off peace, just the way you was saying it sounded like you didnt rhyme... __________________ Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.

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11-26-2006, 10:58 PM	#3 (permalink)
J-Mill Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Da Ville, KY/ C-Town, IN Posts: 117	gotcha thanx i appreciate tha feed!

11-27-2006, 07:20 PM	#4 (permalink)
J-Mill Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Da Ville, KY/ C-Town, IN Posts: 117	uppin

11-29-2006, 01:26 AM	#5 (permalink)
DarkRyda Rookie Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 41	man i have a question for ya nice beat though question is have u eva tried rappin someone elses Lyrics? says 2pac, jay-z,dr dre, the game? maybe try one i wanna hear ya with someone elses lyrics

11-29-2006, 07:26 PM	#6 (permalink)
J-Mill Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Da Ville, KY/ C-Town, IN Posts: 117	^hell na r u fuckin serious!!!! i will neva get into dat fake ghostwriting shit! Don't ever even suggest that shit! The only lyrics im gonna rap are the ones that ive written!! I dont even no u n im ashmeded of u, wow u dont no how bad ghostwriten pisses me off!