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J-Mill · 11-27-2006, 11:06 PM

This is a more deep and lyrical song

i show alotta emotion

n the emotion shows how bad my mic quailty is

plz leave feed

hi-fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=4714380&q=hi

lo-fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=4714380&q=lo

uppin fam!

Prycele$$ · 11-27-2006, 11:15 PM

gotta sound hungry man, gotta ride the beat, lyrics aint half bad tho.. keep elevatin and keep makin tha music..

J-Mill · 11-27-2006, 11:30 PM

thanx dawg

u 4real coo i think u like the only person dat leaves feed on dis site

thanx mane

uppin!

Prycele$$ · 11-28-2006, 07:52 AM

yeah, another thing, make ya bars just a lil bit longer, sumtimes i notice you aint catchin the beat and you fall off a lil bit cuz of that... in this kinda song, you gotta sound sorta mad wit that sad bit in it ya know? you gotta go wit what you rappin or a line like 'ill kill you by snappin your neck, spilling out your guts and make you choke on them by stuffin em in your mouth' will sound like sumthin you do everyday and your tired of it... ya emotions in real life shouldnt be reflected in ya raps, unless its the emotion you need... it will be hard at first but once you get the hang of it, it'll be all good...

J-Mill · 11-28-2006, 03:19 PM

aight good looks fam uppin

DarkRyda · 11-29-2006, 01:18 AM

well man not to hate or anything its mad song you have balls to write ur own lyrics its just off beat

make sure you tighten your flow with the beat. no that im good myself lol i suck just given some advice that was given to me

J-Mill · 11-29-2006, 07:28 PM

thanx brah

this feeds alot betta then the one u left on my otha song

im glad u appreciate tha lyrics

but yall gotta no its comin from the heart

good looks

UPPIN!!

11-27-2006, 11:06 PM	#1 (permalink)
J-Mill Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Da Ville, KY/ C-Town, IN Posts: 117	J-Mill - Mental Abuses This is a more deep and lyrical song i show alotta emotion n the emotion shows how bad my mic quailty is plz leave feed hi-fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=4714380&q=hi lo-fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=4714380&q=lo uppin fam!

11-27-2006, 11:15 PM	#2 (permalink)
Prycele$$ Don Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Elkhart, dat C.O.E niggas... Posts: 2,746	gotta sound hungry man, gotta ride the beat, lyrics aint half bad tho.. keep elevatin and keep makin tha music.. __________________ Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.

11-28-2006, 07:52 AM	#4 (permalink)
Prycele$$ Don Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Elkhart, dat C.O.E niggas... Posts: 2,746	yeah, another thing, make ya bars just a lil bit longer, sumtimes i notice you aint catchin the beat and you fall off a lil bit cuz of that... in this kinda song, you gotta sound sorta mad wit that sad bit in it ya know? you gotta go wit what you rappin or a line like 'ill kill you by snappin your neck, spilling out your guts and make you choke on them by stuffin em in your mouth' will sound like sumthin you do everyday and your tired of it... ya emotions in real life shouldnt be reflected in ya raps, unless its the emotion you need... it will be hard at first but once you get the hang of it, it'll be all good... __________________ Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.

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11-27-2006, 11:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
J-Mill Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Da Ville, KY/ C-Town, IN Posts: 117	thanx dawg u 4real coo i think u like the only person dat leaves feed on dis site thanx mane uppin!

11-28-2006, 03:19 PM	#5 (permalink)
J-Mill Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Da Ville, KY/ C-Town, IN Posts: 117	aight good looks fam uppin

11-29-2006, 01:18 AM	#6 (permalink)
DarkRyda Rookie Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 41	well man not to hate or anything its mad song you have balls to write ur own lyrics its just off beat make sure you tighten your flow with the beat. no that im good myself lol i suck just given some advice that was given to me

11-29-2006, 07:28 PM	#7 (permalink)
J-Mill Outlaw Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Da Ville, KY/ C-Town, IN Posts: 117	thanx brah this feeds alot betta then the one u left on my otha song im glad u appreciate tha lyrics but yall gotta no its comin from the heart good looks UPPIN!!