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DreamUnit36 · 12-08-2006, 07:52 PM

Yo what's crackin' people, everybody knows that Fat Joe and Lil' Wayne got a song out called "Make It Rain" well i got real bored today and thought "hey why don't i make a remix to dis" so i did it's called "I Bring That Pain" give it a listen and leave me some feed, you know what it is --45-Ez--

Kontroversy - I Bring That Pain
www.MySpace.com/KingofKontroversy45

Prycele$$ · 12-08-2006, 08:02 PM

hey man, im lovin yo shit sounds good, lets hop on a muthafuckin collabo get at me...

Lieutenant · 12-08-2006, 08:56 PM

umm its aiight. voice needs to stand out more. i liked the beginning part of the 1st verse. it kinda went downhill from there.

DreamUnit36 · 12-08-2006, 09:16 PM

Yo good looks on the feed, and Pryceless hit me up wit a link so i can hear some of ya stuff aight. Still Uppin!

Prycele$$ · 12-09-2006, 01:05 AM

^^PMd^^

thaone · 12-09-2006, 08:47 PM

that was pretty good

Rhys.e. · 12-09-2006, 10:10 PM

i like that

DreamUnit36 · 12-10-2006, 01:57 AM

Yo good looks on the feed guys, still Uppin!!

Revalation · 12-10-2006, 01:30 PM

Flow was proper, basic flippage of the chorus which is like most people do it for mixtapes. I personally like when someone invents their own chorus and makes the song their own but it all depends on the song, in this case what you did works. Delivery is cool, could be clearer and stronger over the beat but not bad. Lyrics were str8, stuck to the topic and what not. Overall it's a pretty good joint, you might need to up your quality and that will give you a lil more attention from cats and also more clearity. Holla at me for advice on that if you want. Peace!

Check out my joint "Just Can't Understand"

DreamUnit36 · 12-10-2006, 05:19 PM

Yo good looks Rev i got dis wack ass computer mic, but my boy Mint gon' roll through my town and we gon' bang out my mixtape "Excommunicated" i'll peep yours mos def. Still UPPIN!

12-08-2006, 07:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
DreamUnit36 Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 27	Make It Rain (remix) Yo what's crackin' people, everybody knows that Fat Joe and Lil' Wayne got a song out called "Make It Rain" well i got real bored today and thought "hey why don't i make a remix to dis" so i did it's called "I Bring That Pain" give it a listen and leave me some feed, you know what it is --45-Ez-- Kontroversy - I Bring That Pain www.MySpace.com/KingofKontroversy45

12-08-2006, 08:02 PM	#2 (permalink)
Prycele$$ Don Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Elkhart, dat C.O.E niggas... Posts: 2,746	hey man, im lovin yo shit sounds good, lets hop on a muthafuckin collabo get at me... __________________ Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.

12-09-2006, 01:05 AM	#5 (permalink)
Prycele$$ Don Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Elkhart, dat C.O.E niggas... Posts: 2,746	^^PMd^^ __________________ Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.

12-09-2006, 10:10 PM	#7 (permalink)
Rhys.e. Rookie Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 34	i like that __________________ ASSASSAIN

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12-08-2006, 08:56 PM	#3 (permalink)
Lieutenant Don Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 2,543	umm its aiight. voice needs to stand out more. i liked the beginning part of the 1st verse. it kinda went downhill from there.

12-08-2006, 09:16 PM	#4 (permalink)
DreamUnit36 Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 27	Yo good looks on the feed, and Pryceless hit me up wit a link so i can hear some of ya stuff aight. Still Uppin!

12-10-2006, 01:57 AM	#8 (permalink)
DreamUnit36 Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 27	Yo good looks on the feed guys, still Uppin!!

12-10-2006, 01:30 PM	#9 (permalink)
Revalation Criminal Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 78	Flow was proper, basic flippage of the chorus which is like most people do it for mixtapes. I personally like when someone invents their own chorus and makes the song their own but it all depends on the song, in this case what you did works. Delivery is cool, could be clearer and stronger over the beat but not bad. Lyrics were str8, stuck to the topic and what not. Overall it's a pretty good joint, you might need to up your quality and that will give you a lil more attention from cats and also more clearity. Holla at me for advice on that if you want. Peace! Check out my joint "Just Can't Understand"

12-10-2006, 05:19 PM	#10 (permalink)
DreamUnit36 Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 27	Yo good looks Rev i got dis wack ass computer mic, but my boy Mint gon' roll through my town and we gon' bang out my mixtape "Excommunicated" i'll peep yours mos def. Still UPPIN!